2009年考研英語40篇大作文演練與名師點評

第三二篇

　　32 Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:

　　1. describe the picture;

　　2. interpret the meaning of the picture;

　　3. draw your conclusion.

　　You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　井干方知水可貴該圖畫以簡潔的筆觸說明了深刻的道理，這類文章考察的可能性是相當(dāng)大的。The picture focuses on a person standing by a well. Looking at the empty barrel at hand, he sighs, “My God, there is no water at all. I should not have wasted it.”

　　We never know the worth of water till the well is dry. Similarly, we never realize the worth of the best things in life until they are lost. When we are young, some of us bear a destination in mind and try to reach it at all costs. In the due process, we either lose health or our friends—even if we reach that destination at last, will we be happy? Others always think God is not fair to them—they are so frustrated that they can not accumulate the courage to change their lives for the better. When youth becomes history, their world will be even colder and more hopeless.

　　Many of the best things in the world are just in our own hands. It is certainly not easy to realize this point, and even more difficult to cherish them to the uttermost. If we realize the value of youth, health and friends, we will be among the happiest persons of the world. 這篇文章的布局相當(dāng)簡單，共分三段。第一段描述圖畫。第二段闡釋含義，也就是說明其中蘊涵的深刻道理。第三段下結(jié)論。

　　第一段非常簡潔。第二段共有六句話，第一句話一針見血，非常關(guān)鍵。第二句是類推，頗具哲理。第三句和第四句說我們在向著目標(biāo)奮進的過程中常常失去了寶貴的東西，如健康、朋友。第五句話說有些人慨嘆命運的不公。第六句話說當(dāng)青春失去時，世界將變得冰冷無望。第三段是結(jié)語，共分三句話。首先說世上許多最好的東西實際上就在我們手中；然后說理解到這點是不容易的，而做到就更不容易了；最后說如果我們意識到了青春、健康和朋友的價值，我們就是最幸福的人了。 看到這副圖畫，關(guān)鍵是建立表面的含義和隱藏深刻的含義之間的聯(lián)系�！熬�干方知水可貴”可推衍至人生中可貴的東西，如青春、健康和友情等。如果平時多思考、多寫作，考試時即使遇到不同的題目，也能快速反應(yīng)，找到正確的應(yīng)對方法。

　　這篇文章的重要特點就是列舉，將具體圖畫與抽象的人生中可貴的東西建立類比聯(lián)系之后，一定要舉出具體的有代表性的這類可貴的事物。第二段分兩個方面來說，先說了健康與朋友，后說了青春。第三段中一定要與第二段中直接呼應(yīng)，將這三者再列舉一次才能取得理想的效果。