2009年考研英語40篇大作文演練與名師點評

第二十篇

　　20 Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:

　　1. describe the pictures;

　　2. point out the reasons for this phenomenon;

　　3. give possible solutions.

　　You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　這篇文章的結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰，可分為三段來寫，分別是描述圖畫、說明原因和給出解決辦法。In the first picture, a beggar says, “Have pity on me,please. I am old. I am blind.” In the second picture, he is eating to his heart�餾 content in a big restaurant. He tells the waiter, “Another fish, please.” We can see he is in fact a man with bright eyes.

　　These two pictures remind us of such a group of people who don�餿 want to work to earn a living. Instead, they disguise themselves as beggars to make easy money. The reason for this phenomenon is rather obvious. In such a society full of competitions, some people do not want to use their own hands to make a fortune. They also can not bear a poor life, so they make such a shameful choice.

　　To solve this problem, the government and the common people should join their hands. On the one hand, the government should issue policies to take care of those people who are really in need of help. Those fake beggars should be educated and punished in order that they give up begging and live a decent life. On the other hand, common citizens should also extend helping hands. They should report such made�瞮p beggars to the police as soon as possible. If they can help such people learn skills, find jobs and live a normal life, it should be much better. 首段描述了兩幅圖畫。

　　次段的前兩句對圖畫所描述的群體做了總結(jié)——第一句話同時使用了remind…of…和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，是個很好的模板句。第二句話以instead開頭，凸顯了對比。此句中有disguise oneself as(偽裝為)和make easy money(輕松賺錢)兩個詞組，大家注意識記。之后對該現(xiàn)象做出了解釋。

　　第三段給出了解決辦法，從政府和公民兩方面來說(段首的模板句清晰地表明了這一點)，非常有條理。首段的描述中要將兩幅圖畫的對比描述出來。次段的圖畫總結(jié)和原因闡述采用了幾乎相同的推導(dǎo)方式(不想工作——偽裝騙錢；不想用辛勤勞動致富——做出了可恥的選擇)，看來有呼應(yīng)之感覺。末段結(jié)構(gòu)的層次感是由模板句奠定下來的，讀來輕松流暢。