考研復(fù)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)：英語作文30天30分（5-31更新）

第30天 需要與行動（Necessities and Actions）

　　注意……開始上課了……

　　寫作思路與要求

　　本模塊立意于“需要做什么”及“為什么需要這么做”。短文從某一時尚的運動或現(xiàn)狀出發(fā)，通過其必要性、意義或利(弊)分析，最后以“如何做”的建議或綜述結(jié)束短文。短文篇章層次上的三個段落幾乎平分秋色，從三個不同的側(cè)面闡述主題，段落的展開模式主要是對比或枚舉。

　　該模塊的基本提綱模式是：

　　第一段現(xiàn)狀闡述。

　　闡述作文命題所涉及的事物的現(xiàn)狀。

　　第二段必要性闡述。

　　闡述需要做某事的現(xiàn)實必要性或意義或利弊。

　　第三段綜述。

　　在綜合現(xiàn)狀與必要性基礎(chǔ)上，提出如何把該事做好的建議或方法。

　　看看以前考什么，是怎么考的。

　　1995年真題
　　Directions:
　　A)Title: The Hope Project
　　B)Time limit: 40 minutes
　　C)Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the given opening sentence)
　　D)Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and must be written neatly on the 　ANSWER SHEET.

　　OUTLINE:
　　1.Present situation
　　2.Necessity of the project
　　3.My suggestion

　　寫 作 提 綱The Hope Project    
　　①Education plays an important role in the modernization of our country.The extent ②to which children are educated ③is directly of vital importance to ④the improvement of our comprehensive national power.⑤However, in some poverty�瞫tricken rural areas,few school�瞐gers can afford to go to school for ④lack of financial support.⑤Therefore, the Chinese Youth Development Foundation (CYDF) is determined to carry on a financial plan,②which is called the   Hope Project,⑥so as to prevent them from⑦dropping out of school.
　　The project ③is of great neccessity.As we know,the children are the hope and future of China.⑧Their being deprived of education will not only ⑦result in ④a shortage of human resources in those backward areas but also ⑦h(yuǎn)old back the economic development of these areas and even the whole country.⑨Moreover, the Chinese government is unlikely to be able to afford all the money ②needed for the hundreds of thousands of school dropouts.⑨Therefore, the Hope Project is intended to help ⑦set up more schools in those areas ⑥so as to enable more children to receive schooling and raise the general intellectual level of the people there.
　　As a college student,⑩I suggest that more people⑦ from all walks of life be encouraged to support the project with their sense of responsibility.I will send some of my pocket money and stationery to the pupils there.And I will also preach the significance of the project and urge other people to make contributions to this project.Finally,I decide to be a teacher after my graduation to help the children there directly. I firmly believe that with the help of our government and the whole nation,the Project Hope ⑦is bound to be a success.    
　�、匍_宗明義，引出話題；
　�、诙涛亩嗵幨褂昧嗣�詞的后續(xù)修飾語表達法，顯示了考生較高的語言駕馭能力；
　�、鄱涛膬商幱玫絙e of…結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了語言的地道性；
　�、芏涛闹羞\用了動詞的名詞化表達方式，使語言顯得莊重沉穩(wěn)；
　　⑤篇章連接詞分別表示轉(zhuǎn)折和因果，使段落中的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)起伏而不亂；
　�、薅涛膬商幱玫奖硎灸康牡膕o as to動詞不定式結(jié)構(gòu)；
　　⑦短文中使用了多個英語成語，語言靈活地道，富有變化；
　�、噙@是動名詞帶邏輯主語的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，作句子主語，偶爾用之，能畫龍點睛；
　�、崞�章連接詞分別表示遞進和因果，用的恰到好處；
　�、庾詈笠欢翁峁┛忌�建議，本句準(zhǔn)確地使用了虛擬語氣；
　　這里提出考生自己的打算，采用了枚舉排比的展開方式；
　　動詞preach原義表示“布道”，轉(zhuǎn)義為“宣傳”，暗示“一心一意、鍥而不舍”，用在這里十分貼切；結(jié)論句。

　　掌握一定的寫作模式，可以事半功倍。自己填一下試試吧！

　　現(xiàn)狀+做的必要性/理由/利弊+建議/綜述（如何做）

　　Title
　　It�餾 well�瞜nown that ①… now.It�餾 necessary ②….In the first place,it/they can help ③….In the second place,it will lay a foundation/ pave the way for ④….In addition,they/it can ⑤….
(原因)There are many reasons for this.For one thing,⑥….For another,⑦….
（或利/弊）With ⑧…,there will arise a lot of social problems/there exist many advantages/ benefits.First,⑨….Again,with ⑩…,….
　　In regard to these possible problems/benefits,steps should be taken to minimize/ develop them.The first thing we/I should do is to….Another thing we/I can do is to….In addition,….
　�、俨迦朊�詞性從句；指出寫作指令中提到的現(xiàn)象；
　　②插入不定式短語，或名詞性從句，概述上述現(xiàn)象的普遍性；如果用，需用“（should）do”虛擬語氣；
　�、鄄迦霂Р欢ㄊ降膹�(fù)合賓語；③~⑤分述第一句的現(xiàn)象的意義；
　　④插入名詞短語；表示將來的事業(yè)、工作、就業(yè)等；
　　⑤插入動詞短語；同③；
　�、�、⑦插入完整句子，以小寫開始，提出上述現(xiàn)象存在的兩個理由；
　�、�、⑩插入作介詞with賓語的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，表示一種假設(shè)情況；如：with the price rising so high; with so many workers being laid off等；
　�、帷⒉迦胪暾�句子，以小寫開始，提出上述現(xiàn)象存在的兩種利或弊；
　　⑨、插入不定式短語，陳述“如何做”的第一、二兩件事；
　　完整句子，以小寫開始，陳述“如何做”的第三件事。

　　注意：“原因”段和“利弊”段在同一篇短文中只選一段。

　　靈活運用模板，能寫出美妙的應(yīng)試文章。

　　OUTLINE:
　　1.Present situation
　　2.Reasons or serious social consequences for high crime rate
　　3.My suggestion to fight against crime

　　寫 作 提 綱Fight Against Crime

　　It�餾 well�瞜nown that crime has become a headache to both social workers and people on the street now.It�餾 necessary to fight against crime.In the first place,it can help build our society into a safe and peaceful one.In the second place,it will lay a foundation for the healthy and sustainable development of our economy.In addition,it can make it possible for people to lead a normal and fear�瞗ree life.

　　With the rate of crime running ever higher,there will arise a lot of social problems.First,people can no longer go on with their routine life in peace and security.Again,with the society full of murder,robbery,rape and other kinds of crimes,the whole  society will be in total disorder and no social development will be possible.

　　(或)There are many reasons for this.For one thing,In a society where the rate of crime is high,people can no longer go on with their routine life in peace and security.For another,the whole of society will be thrown into total disorder when the society is full of murder,robbery,rape and other kinds of crimes.
In regard to these possible problems,steps should be taken to minimize them.The first thing we should do is to call on the government to create a society of freedom,equality and justice and keep crimes down by using more policemen and making more laws.Another thing we can do is to urge people to be on guard and learn to protect themselves.In addition,they should also make sure that their children are properly educated so as to stay on the right track.

　　典型試題，好好做喲！

　　Write an essay of 160~200 words based on each of the following topics:

　　Task 1.Western Development

　　Task 2.Pay More Attention to Spiritual Civilization

　　Task 3.Harmony in Economic Development

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