專項高分突破：名師幫你修改考研英語作文(4)

Directions

You will graduate from university and are hunting for a job. After reading a job ads， write a letter to the Personnel Resources Department to

　　1）state your reason to write the application，

　　2）describe your relevant education background，

　　3）introduce your English level， and

　　4）state your way of contact.

You should write about 100 words on ANSER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address.

第五篇（sanchez）

Dear Manager,

I saw your advertisement on the newspaper that your campany (company) (is) in need of an auditor. with a bachelor degree in view as well as the passion to be part of your prpfessional (professional) company,(.) I sent in my resume for this position.

I am studying in one of the top (three) prime(\) university(universities) in China.

And(\) my major is accounting, which would be a great advantange (advantage) for being an auditor. Furthermore.(,) my mastery of English is proficiency, which （is）proved by my BEC higher certificate (I was awarded A).(H)here I enclosed my CV, (which) including(included) detailed backgrounds and experiences as well as the contacts in the attanchment (attachment).

Hope to talk to you in person for a better understanding (,) please feel free to contact me,(.) Both telephone and Email are viable (available).

Lokking (Looking) forward to your reply

(S)sincerely

Li Ming

Sara點評：7分，這是常見的作文寫作題型，比較好把握！本文作者內(nèi)容切題，表達清晰，基本連貫！主要稍稍注意個別單詞的書寫和應用就能成為一篇非常好的文章！