考研英語(yǔ)小作文指導(dǎo)：破解應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作

（七）建議信

1．寫(xiě)作攻略
　　建議信是向收信人對(duì)某事提出寫(xiě)信人的建議和忠告。建議信有可能是寫(xiě)給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。建議信要寫(xiě)出寫(xiě)信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。具體寫(xiě)作步驟：
　　首段：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。
　　主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫(xiě)需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。　　　　千萬(wàn)注意不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。
　　結(jié)尾段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要注意有禮貌使讀者容易接受。
　　寫(xiě)作這類題目時(shí)，考生要注意不要跑題，因?yàn)檫@類題很有可能寫(xiě)成議論文，如“我認(rèn)為一……二……，所以要如何如何”�？忌鷳�(yīng)該時(shí)刻記得書(shū)信的交際功能，要考慮到收信人的感受。在給對(duì)方提建議時(shí)應(yīng)該時(shí)時(shí)說(shuō)到I和You，要讓人時(shí)刻感受到這是一種交流。

2．必背模版句型

I would like to suggest that...
我想建議……

I am writing to express my views concerning...
我寫(xiě)信來(lái)是要表達(dá)有關(guān)……我的看法。

You have asked for my advice with regard to... and I will try to make some suggestions.
你問(wèn)我有關(guān)……的事情，我會(huì)嘗試著提出一些建議。

If I were you, I would...
如果我是你，我會(huì)……

It seems to me that you could...
我認(rèn)為你可以……

I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
我想如果你能……，可能會(huì)更好。

I believe you will take my advice into account.
我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。

I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望這些建議/意見(jiàn)/看法對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)實(shí)用/有用/有幫助。

I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
如果這方面有所改善我會(huì)非常開(kāi)心的。

I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.
我時(shí)刻準(zhǔn)備著就此事進(jìn)行更詳盡的討論。
3．必背經(jīng)典范文

Dear Mary，
　　I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise. This is harmful for your health. You have been in poor health these years. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.
　　Do not think that time spent in exercise is wasted. Exercise can improve your physical constitution and refresh the mind. After one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without felling fatigue. Otherwise your study will be interrupted from time to time by fatigue or sickness.
　　I am not advising you to devote all your time to exercise. What I want to say is that exercise is as useful and important as your study. I hope you can take at least one hour�餾 exercise every day after you are recovered. I would be more than happy to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,
John

譯文

親愛(ài)的瑪麗：
　　聽(tīng)說(shuō)你近來(lái)病了許多天，使我感到很不安。但愿你現(xiàn)在好些了。由于你平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)太累了，缺乏運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間，這對(duì)你的健康很不利。這些年來(lái)你身體一直不好，我想如果你今后多參加體育活動(dòng)肯定會(huì)對(duì)身體有很多好處。
　　不要把鍛煉看成是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。鍛煉可以增強(qiáng)你的身體素質(zhì)，使你更有精神。運(yùn)動(dòng)一兩個(gè)小時(shí)可以增加你的學(xué)習(xí)效率。只有有了強(qiáng)健的身體才能高效的學(xué)習(xí)而不覺(jué)疲倦，否則疲勞或疾病就會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí)。
我并不是勸你把時(shí)間都用在鍛煉上，我只是想說(shuō)鍛煉和學(xué)習(xí)一樣，同是有益而且是重要的。我希望你復(fù)原后能每天至少鍛煉一個(gè)小時(shí)�？吹侥阌袀�(gè)強(qiáng)壯的身體，我會(huì)非常高興的。

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