英語六級(jí)作文高分要訣：王長喜十二句作文法(3)

　　批評(píng)、抱怨、投訴信模板

　　Date

　　Dear——

　　1. My name is——.

　　2. I am——.

　　3. I venture to write you a letter about——.

　　4. The focus of the complaint is——.

　　5. For one thing, —— 6. For another,——

　　7. Honestly speaking,—— 8.But——

　　9. Besides,——.

　　10. All in all, there is still much room for improvement.

　　11.I do hope——

　　12.Thank you for your time and kind consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

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　　1.寫信人的姓名。

　　2.寫信人的身份。

　　3.表達(dá)抱怨的內(nèi)容。

　　4.提出抱怨內(nèi)容的核心點(diǎn)。

　　5.抱怨內(nèi)容的一方面。

　　6.抱怨內(nèi)容的另一方面。

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　　8.抱怨產(chǎn)生的原因一。

　　9.抱怨產(chǎn)生的原因二。

　　10.總結(jié)說明所抱怨現(xiàn)象或事物還有很大改進(jìn)空間。

　　11. 表達(dá)本人的愿望。

　　12. 信件結(jié)尾的常用語。

　　A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

　　Jan. 6th, 2002

　　Dear Mr. President,

　　My name is Li Ming. I am a junior student of the civil engineering school in this university. I I venture to write you a letter about the canteen service on campus, which has given rise to many complaints among students.

　　The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food. For one thing, the rice is very hard, the steamed breads are usually sold cold and vegetables are often overcooked. For another, the prices of the foods are surprisingly high. Honestly speaking, the dining environment has been improved since last year. But there are still not enough space and seats for us to have our meals there. Besides, the attitude of the canteen staffs is not hospitable at all.

　　All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope we will not suffer another year. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.

　　Sincerely yours.

　　Li.