9、個人選擇

　　All in all, I would say that living in the city is best(better)，1 for the convenience the city offers in terms of education and work(job opportunities);2 after all, one can always spend vacations in the country---and get the best of both.3

　　※1、選擇結(jié)果

　　※2、選擇原因

　　※3、總結(jié)

　　As for me, I have always led a regular life.1 By everyday exercises, I build up a strong body,2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward life.3

　　※1、個人選擇或?qū)嵺`

　　※2、選擇帶來的好的后果

　　※3、拓展

　　10、現(xiàn)實(shí)運(yùn)用

　　As we all know, children are the future of our country, Their healthy growth has therefore become a serious concern among many people.1 It should be made clear that too much care is not love. The real love and care for them are to prepare them for the future. When faced with difficulties, they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overcome the difficulties. When faced with fierce competition, they can employ their knowledge, skills and experience to confront with their rival.2 This is the younger generation we can expect.3

　　※1、價值體現(xiàn)：孩子關(guān)乎祖國的未來。

　　※2、啟示：重要的原因

　　※3、寄予希望

　　2007年范文寫作

　　首段：圖畫描述：

　　This is a series of interesting and thought-provoking pictures. A goalkeeper, who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal, sees himself as a dwarf. What’s funnier is that the football-player, preparing to kick the ball, regards the goalkeeper as huge as the goal. The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound. Both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges。

　　中間段：寓意象征+舉例說明

　　The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his/her mind. What divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence。(We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings。)We, undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM(the Examination for postgraduate candidates)，provide a good illustration. Some of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well, so they even give up the chance of participating in the examination. In fact, the exam is not as difficult as they suppose, and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final successs。

　　尾段：建議+展望

　　Accordingly, it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our confidence. What we should bear in mind is that no one can overcome difficulties without confidence。(In other words, We should be honest about the challenges we face。) only in this wa we can se a right goal. challenge it ,and achieve it。

　　Tips:

　　1.穩(wěn)重下體的部分是精彩的語言，即文章的高分點(diǎn)，希望同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)。

　　2.文中有下劃線的部分是范文的錯誤，希望大家思考，然后改正，避免自己在寫作時犯這樣的錯誤。

　　3.再次強(qiáng)調(diào)，希望大家不要背范文，學(xué)習(xí)精彩的句式表達(dá)，背會，通過多練習(xí)掌握這些句型。

　　小作文范文及解析

　　2007年P(guān)art A 真題及解析(投訴信&建議信)：

　　Directions:

　　Write a letter to your university library ,making suggestions for improveing its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter. Ues “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address。

　　To Whom It May Concern,

　　I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend ma spare time. Generally speaking ,the services you offer here are quite good; however ,I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration。

　　To begin with ,will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover ,some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines ,we will be very pleased。

　　I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration。

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2008 Part A 真題及解析(致歉信)：

　　Directions:

　　You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob ,your landlord there. Write him a letter to

　　make an apology, and

　　suggest a solution。

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter. Ues “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address。

　　解析

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to express my apology to you。

　　Several days ago，I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately，after I came back from Canada，I found it in my luggage. Was in such an hurry that I forgot to return it to you .I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible. If necessary，I will compensate for any troubles it may cause。

　　Once again，I feel so sorry for any inconvenrence caused. Please accept my apologies。

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Ming

　　2006年P(guān)art A真題及解析(申請信&請求信)

　　Directions：

　　You want to contribute to project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned， asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan。

　　Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter， use“Li Ming”instead。

　　Do not write the address。(10points)

　　解析：

　　To Whom It May Concern，

　　I am writing this letter to you to ask if there is a child in need of financial sponsorship through the Hope Foundation。

　　I am willing to give financial aid to those children who have not had a chance to receive education in poverty-stricken area。 I would like to help two kinds of children：first，those who do not have a stable source which can cover their education fees，and second，those whose academic performance in school is excellent. I have decided to commit myself to save the necessary

　　financial aid required to accomplish my goal. I would also like to be kept informed as to the academic progress of each student every term。

　　I have not doubt(There is not doubt)that I meet the criteria required for a sponsor and look forward to hearing from you。

　　Thank you for your consideration。

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　推薦信：

　　Dear,

　　寫作意圖：簡單介紹，自己與被推薦人關(guān)系，推薦他做什么。

　　推薦原因：被推薦人的相關(guān)工作經(jīng)歷或個性特點(diǎn)，應(yīng)當(dāng)突出與寫信人的相關(guān)性。

　　感謝與期待。

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　解析：

　　Dear Sir，

　　It is with a great pleasure that I recommend to you Mr. Li Lei, an outstanding accountant, for working in your firm。

　　Mr. Li graduated from China Financial University in 1991, majoring in accountancy, After graduation,he came to our firm to be an accountant. In 1996 he obtained the certificate of a certified accountant ,and in 2001 he was promoted to the one of the chief accountants of our firm because of his excellent work。

　　In association with me,mr. li impressed me that he was a friendly and pleasant gentleman,devoted to his firm and profession .it is surely a huge loss for our firm that he has to leave us for some personal reasons。

　　I recommend mr. li without reservation and believe you will find him a real treasure very soon。。

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li ming

　　2005年part a 真題及解析(辭職信)：

　　Directions:

　　Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine design and fashion .but now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, mr. wang,

　　Telling him your decision ,stating your reason(s)，and making an apology。

　　Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Wrte it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “l(fā)i ming”instead. You do not need to write the adress。

　　解析：

　　Dear mr.wang,

　　I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editior for you are your magazine for the reason of myself。

　　Two months ago, I was accepted by the design and fashions,as a member of it . I was deeply impressed by the kindness,diligence of all staff members around me. But during the span of working here, I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more pesceful life ,such as a teacher. And you know that I am not an outgoing girl. I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not reslly like。

　　So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.please accept my apology。

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li ming

　　2009年考研英語大綱樣題應(yīng)用文部分(詢問信)

　　Directions：

　　You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.Write a letter to

　　the sales department of bookstore to ask for：

　　detailed information about the books you want，

　　methods of payment，

　　time and way of delivery。

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end

　　Of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address。

　　解析：

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　As a student preparing for TOEFL in the coming May，I am writing to ask if you have

　　Appoches to TOEFL complied by professor Wamg Sming and published by University College

　　Press in 2006(注意次序)

　　If you have the book for sale，I’d like to mail order it.Pleasel let me know if I can pay for it.by money order or do you accept the credit card?

　　I’d appreciate it if you could send me the book at your earliest convenience by EMS to the following address:

　　Li Ming

　　Room 158, student dormitory no.8

　　West campus, Beijing university

　　Beijing ,100081

　　Sincerely yours

　　Li Ming

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