專項高分突破：名師幫你修改考研英語作文(3)

第二篇（giuxiu_cxw）

2006年真題

Directions:

You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Do not write the address.

Dear Sir or Madam:

　　I am writing this letter for some requests. I am an(a) senior manager working in shanghai(Shanghai), and I have learnt from the offical(official) website that there are some rules(necessary qualities) (required) for being voleenters(a voleenter),such as married, more than 20000 yuan's month earning with a stand career,(.) I think I am completely complying for(with) the above(requests).

　　It would be very thankful if the department could choose a candidate as follow(s),(:) living in s(S)anxi, 10-18 years old, having at least 2 brothers or sisters. I will be(\) support him or her until finishing the universtity ( university) studying(\), including(include) (and cover) all the reasonable expense(s).

　　If there is any(some) relative informtion (information), please contace(contact) me ,(.)my(My phone) number is 00000.

Thanks very much

Sincerely yours,

Liming

Sara點評：6分！注意動詞的應(yīng)用和個別詞的書寫！如果不能確保單詞正確，建議用其他單詞替代。希望多熟悉動名詞，動詞原形的區(qū)別與聯(lián)系�？佳袝r間越來越近，恩波考研英語項目組建議您抓緊時間，多多練習(xí)，加油！