2010年考研英語(yǔ)模擬題及詳解(寫作部分匯編)

　　Part B

　　52. Directions:

　　Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should

　　1) describe the drawing,

　　2) interpret its implications,

　　3) give your comments.

　　You should write 160 – 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

　　Section III Writing

　　52.

　　一、審題謀篇

　　本題為圖畫(huà)式作文。一篇好的作文首先要中心明確，所以考試中，確定主題也成了我們的第一要?jiǎng)?wù)。由于指導(dǎo)語(yǔ)對(duì)主題的提示較少，所以本篇作文的關(guān)鍵是看圖，尤其是圖畫(huà)的題目。在圖畫(huà)中，我們可以看到一匹抬起前腿，將要馳騁的駿馬，題目為：千里之行，是從第一步開(kāi)始的�？梢�(jiàn)，文章主題應(yīng)圍繞“第一步”與“千里之行”的關(guān)系展開(kāi)論述，可以討論“起步”或“行動(dòng)”的重要性。

　　再看指導(dǎo)語(yǔ)可知，文章應(yīng)以圖畫(huà)展示的內(nèi)容為主題，(一)描述圖畫(huà);(二)闡述圖畫(huà)所要表達(dá)的含義;(三)發(fā)表自己的看法。

　　二、

　　參考范文一

　　As we can see in the picture, a horse is starting the first step in his journey vigorously. The prancing horse, together with the line of words beneath that every journey begins with the first step, implies the importance of beginnings, and the necessity of getting off to a right start in anything that one undertakes.

　　As we all know, the foundations of a building must be strong, or else the whole structure will fall down someday. The pioneering of any enterprise always contains the soul of it, in which is wrapped the whole motive, purpose and plan of the venture. The success of autumn crops depends on the initial steps taken in the spring. Therefore, it seems that the beginning point is dynamic and alive and often more important than any other point in the journey. When asked about the key to success, a successful author replied that the most helpful thing was to start writing. Without taking the first step, potential genius will contents itself with mediocrity. Only by trying, the first can produce the second, the second the third, and so on to the very goal.

　　In sum, there is a magic potential in the first step taken toward a successful end in view.

　　參考范文二

　　As we can see in the picture, a horse is taking his first step of a journey. This beginning seems to be hard and painstaking， but every journey begins with the first step. No matter what we are going to do, we should start with our action.

　　Though planning and dreaming is important, action is essential for our success. Maybe after all the efforts we still can’t accomplish our aims, but taking no action can get us nowhere. For example, some students often complain about their bad luck when getting low marks in an exam; however, the reason for their failure is that most of them don’t listen carefully in class nor review their lessons after class. By contrast, those who get high marks have devoted much time and effort to learning. The most accomplished people in the world always have a history of making perseverant efforts, as Madam Cury and Edison did as scientists, Beethoven and Bach did as musicians, Marx and Confucius did as philosophers.

　　In short, no pains no gains. Let us put our plans and aims into action. Only after great effort can we get what we want and live an accomplished life; otherwise, our life will be full of failure and disappointment, which is surely no one’s choice.