2010年12月英語六級考試作文預測及范文(23)

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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:

　　1)現(xiàn)在很多年輕人缺乏拼搏精神

　　2)導致這一問題的原因是什么

　　3)大學生應該加強拼搏精神

　　【思路點撥】

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求指出一個問題，指綱第2點要求分析導致該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明如何解決該問題，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含以下內(nèi)容：描述年輕人缺乏拼搏精神的現(xiàn)狀;分析導致這一問題的原因;說明大學生應該如何加強拼搏精神。

　　【參考范文】

　　Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit

　　Nowadays, quite a few people believe that combatant spirit is essential for one’s success in today’s competitive world. However, some young people today think nothing of this spirit which，in their opinion, is only needed in revolutionary age. Even worse, when facing the difficulties, they will choose to yield or cower without making any efforts.

　　There are many factors resulting in young people’s lack of combatant spirit. Among these, comfortable living environment plays a vital role. Today’s parents provide nearly everything to the children, which results in the children’s lack of motivation for striving on their own. What’s more, the present education system does not pay much attention to help the young people build up the combatant spirit.

　　Considering the importance of combatant spirit, I think it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen young people’s combatant spirit. Above all, parents shouldn’t spoil their children and should ask their children to strive for what they intend to obtain. Moreover, schools should build a better environment for students to develop their struggle and aggressive spirit. Besides, young people themselves should adjust their minds and follow the examples of those people in history or around us who achieve their success under the stimulation of combatant spirit. In a word, it is an urgent thing for today’s young people to enhance combatant spirit.