2011年英語四級寫作提高：如何改寫范文

　　最后，提純范文“措辭”。

　　1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

　　2. thousands and thousands 成千上萬的

　　形容“多”的表達方法：millions and millions

　　a multitude of

　　a great deal of

　　a large amount of

　　plenty of

　　many a

　　3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“討論，辯論”的意思，而是“認為”。

　　I argue that … …

　　I maintain that … …

　　I claim that … …

　　I insist that … … = I think that … …

　　I hold that … …

　　I assert that … …

　　I assume that … …

　　4. negative adj. 否定的，相反的

　　hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

　　5. phenomenon n. 現(xiàn)象

　　social phenomenon 社會現(xiàn)象

　　natural phenomenon 自然現(xiàn)象

　　6. intellectual adj. 聰明的= intelligent， bright， clever

　　(選詞策略：使用最近所學的單詞，如intellectual 》 intelligent 》 bright 》 clever)

　　在分析并掌握范文之后，我們需要運用范文知識練習仿寫。筆者運用2005年12月范文中的模板結構仿寫了2006年12月的四級作文，以供參考：

　　1. 許多人喜歡在除夕夜看春節(jié)晚會

　　2. 但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會

　　3. 我的看法

　　Nowadays， the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast， while gathering with their beloved family。

　　However， an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned， is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand， some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs， such as the emotional song， the graceful dance， the funny short sketch， the amusing comic dialogue， the delightful magic， and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand， some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion， the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant。

　　In my opinion， the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people， but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening， it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation。

　　寄語：分析范文或優(yōu)秀作文是我們學好寫作的第一步。不要小看任何的優(yōu)秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的內(nèi)容。

　　To see a world in a grain of sand，

　　And a heaven in a wild flower，

　　Hold infinity in the palm of your hand，

　　And eternity in an hour。

　　一沙一世界，

　　一花一天堂，

　　手中即無限，

　　永恒亦短暫。

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