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 四六級作文沖刺點撥--決勝在于創(chuàng)造閃光點
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四六級作文沖刺點撥--決勝在于創(chuàng)造閃光點
http://1glr.cn 來源:點點英語 點擊: 更新:2005-5-13

  戰(zhàn)鼓已經(jīng)敲響了,各位奮斗在抗擊CET最前線的點點英語的朋友們,你們辛苦啦,希望下面的內(nèi)容能夠幫上大家哦!

  四六級考試越來越使模板無用武之地,閱卷老師在閱卷的過程中最多的是關(guān)注同學們的用詞和句型的使用。

  高分作文標志

  1:四級120-150字;六級150—180字;

  2、是否長短句交叉;

  3、用詞是否恰當,準確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

  4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復詞;

  下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項

  1.適當用被動代替主動,這樣能更客觀的反映事實,句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

  2.善于使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。

  如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語放在中間,一般放在動詞,助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。

  比如說:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that…

  3.一定要學會換詞,換形象,具體的代替太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,

  people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)

  下面舉一篇我南京六級班上一位同學寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。

  Computer and I By Simmy

  I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

  exceedingly替換very

  thrilling替換exciting

  sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替換sb. be interested in sth.

  google替換search

  an army of替換a lot of

  The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

  The dawn of the new century witnessed是一個精彩句型,用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情;

  Increasing popularity替換more and more popular

  Coincident with…非常地道的詞匯,表達“與…一致”的意思,替換With…

  Advancement替換development

  Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換enter into

  Current ( currently )替換now

  Appeal to sb.替換sb. be interested in sth.

  Growing individuals替換more and more people

  It is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型,說某事是毫不夸張的

  For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

  For a start替換To begin with

  We can, freely, search用了插入語的寫作手法

  our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動

  Additionally替換In addition / Besides

  Deliver替換send

  There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

  There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,這個句子有三個精彩之處,首先There is no denying that這個句型,還有however作為插入語,function in the disservice of替換do harm to

  Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )

  Net citizen網(wǎng)民,屬于精彩用詞

  As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

  No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sides

  Computers do play,do強調(diào)

  Positive替換important / good等

  A slice of替換a part of

  Unfavorable替換bad

  Impacts替換effects / influences

  We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入語

  Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage )

  Facet替換aspect

  各位同學,上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點,作文怎么會不得高分呢!

  以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞,各位同學可以參考一下。

  1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)

  2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising

  (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good

  3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad

  如果bad做表語,可以有be less impressive代替

  eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

  4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.

  注:用many, if not most一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。

  Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most.

  5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some

  6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,

  hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

  it is universally acknowledged that)替think

  (因為是書面語,所以要加that)

  7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing

  8: shared代common

  9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )

  10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion

  11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞,副詞用increasingly.

  Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

  Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

  12.little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly

  13..benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of

  14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer

  15.exceedingly,extremely代替very

  16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ...代替necessary,

  inevitable

  17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in

  18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.

  19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

  20.be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear

  21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause.

  22. There are several reasons behind sth代替..reasons for sth

  23.desire代替want.

  24.pour attention into代替pay attention to

  25.bear in mind that代替remember

  26. enjoy, possess代替have(注意process是過程的意思)

  27. interaction代替communication

  28.frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth

  29.to name only a few, as an example代替for example

  30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible

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