時間還有十幾天,英語主要提分項重點是作文,今天給大家整理了現(xiàn)階段小作文的備考事項及要點,希望大家可以在小作文上也多拿幾分。
►小作文寫作要點
先來說說寫作要點。文章是否包含題目中的所有要點也是小作文的重要評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一。首先,數(shù)應(yīng)達(dá)到100詞左右;其次,小作文題目中提到的要點(一般為三點)應(yīng)該在文中全部提。所以,審題要仔細(xì),不能遺漏問題中的要點。根據(jù)這一要求,小作文一般寫3-4段。仍然小作文真題為例說明這一點。
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
題目中的指令是Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology,很明顯作文應(yīng)包括三個要點:告訴老板自己的辭職決定,陳述辭職的原因并表示歉意。范文包含了上述三個要點:第一段告訴老板自己的辭職決定,第二段給出了辭職的三個原因,而末段表示了歉意。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to inform you about my decision to resign from my current position. There are a few factors involved that I find intolerable.
First of all, the salary has proven to be much lower than you originally promised, and I have a large family to support. In addition, the office is located in the downtown area, yet I live in the suburbs, so it is exhausting for me to spend over three hours commuting every day. Most importantly, I feel rather disappointed and left out on the job itself, as in the past two months I was never given any really important responsibility.
I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
綜上所述,可以用3-4個段落對應(yīng)題目中的幾個要點,一般是一個段落寫一個要點。在闡述要點時,各個段落分工如下:
第一段:交代寫信的目的;
第二段:從兩三個方談?wù)撔诺闹黧w內(nèi)容,各個方面之間以關(guān)聯(lián)詞相呼應(yīng),給人層次分明的感覺,像范文第二段中的關(guān)聯(lián)詞first of all, in addition, most importantly就使得第二段充分而連貫;
第三段:闡述第三個要點,如果有的話;
最后一段:從交際的角度來完成此信,如獲得恩惠后表示感激、造成麻煩時表示歉意等。
►小作文語言問題詳解
小作文的格式很重要,小作文的語言也很重要。除了一般作文的要求,如沒有語法錯誤、用詞豐富、句子結(jié)構(gòu)有變化以外,小作文還有特殊的要求,如文體方與交際方面的要求。下面以一篇范文為例剖析這幾點。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to inform you about my decision to resign from my current position. There are a few factors involved that I find intolerable.
First of all, the salary has proven to be much lower than you originally promised, and I have a large family to support. In addition, the office is located in the downtown area, yet I live in the suburbs, so it is exhausting for me to spend over three hours commuting every day. Most importantly, I feel rather disappointed and left out on the job itself, as in the past two months I was never given any really important responsibility.
I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
一、遣詞造句
首先,本文用詞準(zhǔn)。例如,current position中的current,(spend over three hours) commuting中的commuting,(any really important) responsibility中的responsibility。其次,句型多變。有并列句,如第二段首句。還有較多的復(fù)合句,包含主句與從句,如第二段的第二句與第三句。當(dāng)然,銜接手段也很豐富,具體內(nèi)容會在明天的總結(jié)中談到。
二、文體規(guī)范
所謂文體,就是考研大綱中所說的語域問題。小作文主要考查兩類文體,即式文體與非正式文體。寫給團體或機構(gòu)的書信一般使用正式語言,即不用縮略語和口語用法。非正式文體主要涉寫給朋友的書信,可以使用縮略語和口語用法。上面的信是寫給團體負(fù)責(zé)人的,所以用語正式。
三、交際原則
所謂交際原則,就是要針對不同場合使用不同語言,使交流得以進行。落實到小作文的書信,就是要恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂枚Y貌語言。上面文中的末句就體現(xiàn)了這一原則。不同的應(yīng)用文有不同的用語,考生應(yīng)該加以熟悉和背誦,使考試時能運用自如。針對不同應(yīng)用文的具體套話。
核心提示:在兩篇作文中,小作文,就是應(yīng)用文滿分為10分,得高分比大作文容易一些,因為它更加套路化,對語言的要求也不如大作文那么高。綜上所述,注意格式是小作文得高分的第一步。
作文與閱讀一樣極為重要。在兩篇作文中,小作文,就是應(yīng)用文滿分為10分,得高分比大作文容易一些,因為更加套路化,對語言的要求也不如大作文那么高。可是考生的實際得分卻不是很理想。出現(xiàn)這種問題的主要原因在于寫作的格式、語言和要點等方注意不夠。
►下面介紹的是小作文的格式問題。
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to inform you about my decision to resign from my current position. There are a few factors involved that I find intolerable.
First of all, the salary has proven to be much lower than you originally promised, and I have a large family to support. In addition, the office is located in the downtown area, yet I live in the suburbs, so it is exhausting for me to spend over three hours commuting every day. Most importantly, I feel rather disappointed and left out on the job itself, as in the past two months I was never given any really important responsibility.
I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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