2007年考研真題 小作文
51.Directions
Write a letter to you university library，making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. I’m writing to tell some of my ideas，which I hope to be helpful for you. (第一段寫的還不錯(cuò)，而且加入了身份的介紹，同時(shí)寫出了題目要求---建議，且?guī)в卸ㄕZ從句)
I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date(過期). It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore(邏輯連貫)，since we have a huge number of books，it is not easy to find the right one easily. However，if we can introduce some new searching means(引進(jìn)新的搜索方式，比較好的思路， 如果按湘湘講的寫可以說書太多找起來不方便，帶來的壞影響就是太浪費(fèi)時(shí)間)，such as implementing new information management system that would be useful. (他沒有寫服務(wù)，其實(shí)就寫了兩點(diǎn)建議)
Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I’m looking forward to seeing some new changes soon. (模板語言)
Sincerely Yours，
Li Ming
2006年考研小作文
51.Directions
You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned，asking them to help find a candidate
You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
Dear Sir or Madam，
As a college student who is studying and living in a good environment，I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long time，I write this letter to request your help to recommend a proper candidate. (開頭太長(zhǎng)，不過語言很好，而且有身份介紹，同時(shí)說出了很清晰的目的，但是不建議基礎(chǔ)不好的同學(xué)模仿)
I wonder if it is convenient for you if three things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First，the child should come from Gansu Province，for I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second，it will be better if the child is a primary school student. I hope I will help him/her from the very beginning. In addition，he/she must be willing to return to his hometown to help built it after graduation from university.(注意看其中的內(nèi)容，詞匯沒有任何特殊之處，基本全部是初高中詞匯，就是搭配的比較好，且沒有任何的錯(cuò)誤)
My plan will be carried out as follows. On one hand，I will remit at least 2,000 Yuan in cash every year until he/she finishes his/her education before entering college. On the other hand，I decide to teach the child一 math and English in person during my summer vacation，which will surely be more beneficial to the child. (這個(gè)段落作者依然是在使用自己最會(huì)用的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，但大家無論如何要盡量使用定語從句!!!!而詞匯他只用了幾個(gè)他會(huì)的難詞，所以大家記得，句式簡(jiǎn)單詞匯難，詞匯簡(jiǎn)單句式難是你可以二選一的方式，如果做不到，那就保證少出錯(cuò)，哪怕簡(jiǎn)單.)
Your prompt help would be highly appreciated. And I am looking forward to your reply very soon.(模板!!)
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
2005年考研小作文題目
51.Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions，But n5ow you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss，Mr. Wang，telling him your decision，stating your reason (s)，and making an apology.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
You do not need to write the address. (10 points)
Dear Mr. Wang，
First of all，please allow me to express my deep sorry to you for my resignation(目的詞). I do know that this will bring about much trouble to you so that I write to you for my explanation.
I decided to quit for some reasons as follows.(理由) To begin with，the job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions is not suitable to me. What’s more，I am preparing for another degree and I prefer to further my study. Again，I apologize for my resignation to you! (這個(gè)范文的中間段寫的之爛不評(píng)價(jià)了，沒什么內(nèi)容，當(dāng)然它具備唯一一個(gè)它具備的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，那就是沒出錯(cuò).....)
I am looking forward to your early reply. (模板太爛!!!!更好的句式比如說 i will be right here to wait for your early approval and once agian feel deeply sorry for the inconvenience my resignation has cause to you.
Sincerely yours，
Li Ming
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