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專項(xiàng)高分突破:名師幫你修改考研英語(yǔ)作文(2)

第五篇:題目三:You have been selected to sing in a talent show. What song would you choose? Why? I am a loyal music listener, but maybe not a good singer. I listen to(have heard) a great deal of popular music. It is hard to say which song is my favorite right now.

  People often cho(o)se those songs which(that) they think they can best perform, not just the ones they like. I have never been in a talent show.  But I have seen Super-Female-Voice(a talent show) which is very famous in China.  One day I saw the competition, a critic said to a group that they must notdon’t know what ismusic.  The critic said that singing is not simply(that) one sang(sing) one sentence and the other singer sang(sing) the following, or just singing(sing) the song worked as(by) reciting a paper, paragraph by paragraph.  The critic also said that they must not(\) know what the song was really about.  So I think it is more than just singing the right lyrics and in tune, but also that one should understand the meaning of the song and express it ,and learn to control the tempo and intonation.

  So I think I would choose the song-- “God is a girl.”  It is not a religious song.  Because(after) I have(\) researched(ing) the song on the BaiKe in BaiDu websites(like Wikipedia abroad), I find that it has a special background story.  A girl in the band has(had) a serious disease and need(s) someone to contribute a kidney to prolong her life.  A boy wants(ed) to donate his, but the doctors do(did) not agree because the doctors are(were) afraid of happening(of) rejection phenomenon. During this time the boy came along with the girl, and he wrote out this song which  was found after he  died as well as a testment. The doctor followed the testment , carried out his kidney and performed the operation. After the operation the girl dressed wedding dress at the boy’s grave ,then she faint and never opened her eyes. Later, I heard(that)  this story is(was) not true as none of the group members is(was) dead. And the lyrics is(was) not easy to understand for me and I can’t(couldn’t) see too much that the story have connection with the lyrics.

  In fact, when I listen to music I seldom treat the lyrics seriously, usually just the melody. Many pop songs are euphonious. This song is the same as a Chinese pop song, and many people in China know the melody of Chinese version. Then I think maybe I would choose “Cinderella,” a song in Play Band albums. A little girl she(who) listened to many story(stories) that her mother told her, all about a sad Princess. So she did not want be any of them.  She wanted to be just who she was. She did not want anyone set(to restrict) her free and she didn’t want to be distressed about her life.  She hoped she would be happy when she grew up.  She hoped she could be equal to the person she loved and that they would respect each other.  She could overcome her own difficulty, and she wanted to be protected by herself .This song is not only sung by a Sweden group Play, but sung by a Thailand singer Tata also then. Which(The) version Chinese most family(familiar) with is sung by Taiwan group SHE. They have(are) my favorite singers. And they are very successful and popular, but I need not look(don’t want to be) like them. Though success is very important, I don't want people(to) think the song is the same old(old rough) thing.  Maybe I am not the best of the best for this show. Though this song might not allow me to win the champion, that is not strange. After all I am not naturally musical.   But I will help myself get through difficulties if I still have the potential and still have a goal.  I will do my best preparing the show until I can make it.

  Finally, I hope the song would be the one I write so that I could tell my own story.

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