文都名師郭崇興：2007年考研作文簡評(含范文)

　　北京·中國人民大學 郭崇興

　　07年考研英語塵埃落定。首先，小作文考信，大作文考圖畫，這都沒有出我們的預料。 信十分簡單，用老師的方法：先用中文列個題綱。

比如：①圖書館開門太晚。②冬天不供應熱水。③增添設備減少借還書時間，等等。然后變成英文，100余詞的作文屈指可成。其次，今年的大作文并未按跟局勢掛鉤來出（去年跟“超女”、“追星”等話題掛鉤），這也在我們預測之中。但圖畫含義之深刻，卻出乎大多數(shù)人的意料之外。用郭老師的作文法，40分鐘的大作文時間，起碼抽出3～5分鐘去想寫什么內(nèi)容，千萬不能跑題。至于何謂“不跑題”?這亦未有定論。比如03年考“溫室的花朵”，有人認為其暗指家長對獨生子女的溺愛，這因固然很好。但也有人認為其喻意是指一個國家或民族必須有強大的政府保護，否則其人民將遭殃（如巴勒斯坦，黎巴嫩等），這也未嘗不可。

　　至于07年作文含義？有人認為守門員覺得門太寬，難以守住，而踢球者覺得門太小而守門人太高，向影很大，無處不在，如何路易呀？這都是缺少自信的表現(xiàn)，于是就以信心為題下筆來寫。當然，也有人不這么認為。他們認為07年圖畫代表了“主觀”與“客觀”的區(qū)別。雖然球門寬窄是固定的，但在守者眼里太“寬”而在攻者眼里又太“窄”。這有點象明月---“世人喜其朗亮，而盜賊惡其光明”；又象春雨----“農(nóng)夫喜其潤澤，而旅人恨其泥濘”是一個道理。這也說得過去。總之，作文沒有固定答案，只要講得有道理，就不算跑題。然后，開始寫。這就是英文表達的問題了。（見范文）

　　51.小作文

　　Dear Sir Jan 20 2007

　　I’m a student in our university and now,I would like to convey in this letter my frank suggestions to improve our library services to you.

　　In the first place,if you open much earlier in the morning,for example,before 7:30 am,students would be able to avoid the chilly wind waiting outside.In the second place,if you provide students with hot water,they would feel grateful to you because it is both inconvenient and improper to drink cold water in winter.Last but not the least is that you should,if possible,buy more computer equipment so as to shorten the time of borrowing and returning books.

　　It is my sincere belief that if you do sth as I have suggested above,it will not only benefit the students,but also do googd to the university faculty.

　　Sincerely Yours Li Ming

　　52.大作文

　　Here is a picture of a football match in which a goal keeper is standing in front of a goal,ready to protect it while a footballer is trying to kick the ball in.At the same time,the goal keeper is thinking:”How wide the goal is!How can I keep it?”while the footballer is thingking about what is contrary to this:”The goal keeper is so big that I nearly don’t’t have any chance of kicking in.”

　　Obviously,as is shown in this cartoon,both of them don’t’t have enough confidence and if you have no confidence,how can you get your goal in life?!Losing one’s self-confidence before doing things can not merely affect your thoughts but also do harm to the actions you will take.

　　For example,when I was in the middle school,once,our school basket ball team would play against another team which was very famous in our city and eveyone in our team felt that the only consequence would be our team’s failure.As a result,we didn’t even make any preparations beforehand.of course,the result was—we failed.One year later,we met the same team in a match again.This time,our teacher inspired us with confidence and hope.Then,we made a detailed plan and we practiced and out of everybody’s imagination,we finally won.So,our conclusion was—“Confidence is the first step to success!”

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