2010年6月英語四級作文預(yù)測范文及點評(5篇)

　　預(yù)測作文(二)

　　Opening Psychological Courses

　　1. 許多人建議大學(xué)開設(shè)心理課程

　　2. 我對這一問題的看法

　　【范文】

　　Recently more  and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the following reasons.

　　On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment  and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a door for communication  and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.

　　In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological development.

　　【點評】

　　首段提出主題，其中第二句為過渡句，引出下文;第二段提出三點同意的理由;最后一段得出結(jié)論，與第一段首句呼應(yīng)，其中第二句是解釋型的補充說明句。

　　范文首段提出許多人建議大學(xué)開設(shè)心理課程。作者同意這一建議，并分三點在第二段中敘述理由。首先，目前的學(xué)習(xí)以及將來的就業(yè)壓力需要開設(shè)心理課程。其次，教會學(xué)生如何調(diào)整在不同環(huán)境下的情緒。最后，給學(xué)生介紹有利于其身心健康的好習(xí)慣。第三段總結(jié)呼應(yīng)首段內(nèi)容。

　　第二段第一點中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的”，修飾兩個名詞詞組，對比鮮明，at the moment表示“現(xiàn)在”，in the future表示“將來”，open a door for…表示“開啟了……之門”;第二點中的regulate表示“調(diào)節(jié)，控制”;第三點中的conducive表示“有益于……的”，后接介詞to。