2010年6月英語四六級考試寫作講義精選(二)

　　第一節(jié)

　　必須改正的語法錯誤:

　　1.詞性 success n succeed v

　　2.單復數(shù)：電腦很有用 Computers are very useful

　　3.冠詞

　　4.時態(tài)：作文基本上以現(xiàn)在時為主。

　　5.代詞一致

　　例：

　　If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.

　　Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. ...... Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.

　�、贏lthough honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.

　　Dishonest people are short-sighted.

　　注：virtue 美德;customer 顧客

　　①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?

　　高分作文：

　　用詞準確、句式多樣，

　　推薦句式有，被動句 ： It is widely believed that...

　　呻吟句：I you we;compare come to the conclusion

　　A comparison of the two graphs leads us to the conclusion that

　　非人稱主語句、復合句、并列句

　　復合句中共有六種從句：主語從句、賓語從句、表語從句、定語從句、狀語從句、同位語從句： ,+which 非限制性定語從句

　　1) Motor vehicles discharge large amounts of exhaust fumes. They seriously pollute the air in the city.

　　Motor vehicles 機動車;discharge 排放;exhaust fumes 尾氣

　　They→,which

　　注：computers are very cheap. Almost every family can buy one.;so that

　　computers are so cheap that almost every family can buy one.

　　第二節(jié)

　　作文中注意：

　　1、不要用口語詞 (You konw. wanna. gonna. hay ……)

　　2、不要用生僻詞

　　搭配共分為四種：

　　第一種：形容詞+名詞(大幅度的增長 — a sharp increase )

　　第二種：動詞+名詞 (犯罪 — commit a crime )

　　(達到目的 —achieve a goal)

　　第三種：動詞+副詞(大幅度地增長 — increase sharply)

　　(大幅度地增長 — increase dramaticly)

　　第四種：動詞+介詞(或+小副詞 up down out off)

　　( break out/down/into/through)

　　例：

　　We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box.

　　注：soming 改成 something;happened cause 改成 caused;cent 改成 changes / coins

　　when we take the bus, we need carry coins own,

　　When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some

　　other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.

　　注：人們的 觀點 不一致：

　　people's opinion differ.

　　When it comes to reading, people's opinion differ.

　　第三節(jié)

　　全真試題—Unit 1

　　Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as

　　many as bad books.

　　注：由于是限制型定語從句，兩個逗號應該去掉。

　　認為：think,believe,argue,claim,hold

　　But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of

　　books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.

　　注：but 改成 however;the 應該去掉;who從句前后逗號應該去掉

　　To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.

　　By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

　　注：To my point 改成 in my opinion 或者 in my view;By 改成 In

　　就我而言，我認為：as far as i am consider

　　Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.

　　注：more and more 改為 an increasing number of

　　第四節(jié)

　　1995年6月

　　Directions:

　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: Should Firecrackers Be Banned? You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).

　　Should Firecrackers Be Banned?

　　1. 有人認為放鞭炮是好事，為什么?

　　2. 有人認為放鞭炮是壞事，為什么?

　　3. 我的看法

　　注：傳統(tǒng)：tradition、custom

　　1. Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing.

　　Some people think that setting off firecrackers is beneficial. First it can add to atmosphere on festivals. Second it is a Chinese tradition.

　　Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing. They say that it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.

　　注：When it comes to setting off firecrackers,people's opinion differ.

　　簡單句的擴展：拉長主謂賓，加上定狀補。

　　First,pets can reduce our loneliness.

　　In the first place,pets such as dogs,cats,birds can reduce loneliness for both adults and children.

　　2. 造成：cause、lead to、result in sth.、bring about、be

　　responsible for

　　First,setting off firecrackers leads to fires.Secondly it result in injuress to people.Finally it also brings about noise.