新東方：英語四級考試寫作沖刺班內(nèi)部筆記

　　選擇性觀點(diǎn)的變體的文章寫作邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　Paragraph I:(1)引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點(diǎn); (2)簡明扼要的提出人們在這個(gè)問題上的兩種不同看法。

　　Paragraph II:(1)提出作者觀點(diǎn)(本文主題句);

　　(2)舉例加以論證。

　　Paragraph III:(1)總結(jié)全文(再次強(qiáng)調(diào)作者觀點(diǎn))

　　范文17. My View on Fate

　　There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.

　　注：1. consensus 相同意見

　　2. 第一句話可以套用，如范文18：There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.

　　3. while 輕微轉(zhuǎn)折和對比，強(qiáng)轉(zhuǎn)折用詞but, however 4. master 主人

　　As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands. In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have. We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.

　　注：1. 第一句as far as與I agree重復(fù)，把后半句改為the latter opinion seems more reasonable。

　　2. architect 建筑師，archor 弓箭手

　　3. In fact 前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，之前從正面闡述，之后從反面闡述

　　范文17. My View on Fate (續(xù))

　　Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.

　　注：1. 本段開始舉例

　　2. Let's take……for example 中間是插入語，表示強(qiáng)調(diào)，舉例不宜太長。