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　　題目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提綱：(1)為什么自行車在中國這樣普及(2)和汽車的比較(3)自行車在中國的前途

　　Score: 8

　　Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.

　　The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car.

　　In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.

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　　Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.

　　注：1. 第一句總寫，第二句和第三句分寫，最后總寫。

　　2. During the rush hour 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開頭。

　　3. 破折號內(nèi)容為同位語,句式多變化。

　　Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.

　　注：1. Compared with cars 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開頭。

　　2. be superior to/ be inferior to 優(yōu)于/ 低于

　　3. thirst, second, third 英語語言有層次感，信號詞

　　4. cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive

　　5. be good for health 對健康有好處(萬能理由)

　　6. Moreover 表示遞進

　　In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.

　　注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man