名師：英語四六級考試寫作題型分析及范文

　　[例2]Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Competition. Your composition should be less than 120 words. Remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition.

　　Outline:

　　1�盩he importance of competition

　　2�盩he function of competition

　　3�盡y own practices

　　[范文]

　　Competition

　　Competition makes people active and creative. It is very necessary to compete if human society wants to advance. Without it, we would become lazy and nobody would take any responsibility.“Three monks,there will be no drinking water.”This Chinese proverb vividly describes why China�餾 productivity was so low before Mr. Deng came into power. At that time, we had the so�瞔alled planned economy. There was no competition at all. So farmers didn�餿 work hard. Workers didn�餿 work hard. China was on the edge of collapse.

　　Competition can stimulate people to try their best to do things. For example, in 100�瞞eter race, each sportsman runs as quickly as possible, trying to win the champion, the same things happen in our society and in our daily life. If a company wants to surpass, it must compete with them. It must raise its efficiency. All the companies doing this will no doubt benefit the whole society and the whole human beings.Being a student, I must compete with other students in our studies. I must study hard in all the fields so that I can be a useful man when I enter the society after graduation.

　　文章一開頭就提出了競爭的重要性。接下來，作者用了兩個事例更進(jìn)一步說明了主題。最后談到了自己的做法。

　　[例3]

　　Directions:For this Part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Losing and Gaining weight according to the following.Your composition should be less than 120 words.Remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition.

　　Outline:

　　The comparison of one’s body to a car: the similarities and differences of one’s body and one’s car.

　　1�盩he ways for gaining weight and losing weight.

　　2�盡y own practices.

　　[范文]

　　Losing and Gaining weight

　　The process of gaining or losing weight can be explained by comparing your car. First, your car can’t run if there is no petrol or diesel oil. Because it needs energy. The same thing happens to your body. Your body also needs energy, the food you eat can be converted into energy,with which you can run, you can talk, you can do everything. Second, if you eat too much you will gain weight. We know a car with too heavy load can�餿 run quickly and safely. Maybe it will break down. For the same reason, if you are too fat, it is also very inconvenient and dangerous. You might get heart disease,diabetes, and hypertension and so on. If such things happen, doctor would ask you to lose weight.

　　You eat too much and you don�餿 take exercise, you�餷l gain weight. So if you want to lose weight you have to do the opposite. You will be on a diet. You will go out and do some exercises, such as, running, swimming, and playing football,etc. Soon, you�餷l be back in good condition and good shape again.

　　As far as I am concerned, I get up and go to bed early, do plenty of exercises everyday, and pay special attention to the food I eat as well. I don�餿 eat too much meat. Instead, my diet consists of vegetables, fruits, eggs, fish, and beans. By doing this I can keep fit.

　　作者在這篇文章中先用比較對比法比較了人與車之間的相似之處：車需要汽油，人需要食物;車載的重物過多跑不快，人長得太胖既行動不便也存有隱患，因而過于肥胖 的人就需要減肥。第一段的最后一句話起了承上啟下的作用。接下來作者談了如何減肥，最后很自然地過渡到作者自己的做法。

　　第三節(jié)關(guān)鍵詞作文

　　關(guān)鍵詞作文是根據(jù)作文題目以及所給出的關(guān)鍵詞寫短文。關(guān)鍵詞的數(shù)目由幾個到十幾個不等。寫這種題型的作文，要特別注意關(guān)鍵詞的作用。關(guān)鍵詞是短文內(nèi)容發(fā)展的“路標(biāo)”，在作文思路和寫作內(nèi)容上起著決定乾坤的作用。因此，寫出的文章要把所給的這些關(guān)鍵詞都用上，可以一句中用上幾個詞，也可以幾句中用上一個詞，只要能做到恰到好處即可。而且，要學(xué)會根據(jù)所給關(guān)鍵詞的語義群分段。如果所給的關(guān)鍵詞可以分為三組，那么，短文就可以寫成三段。如果給出的關(guān)鍵詞是兩組，短文就可以寫為兩段。再者，要把給出的關(guān)鍵詞用在刀刃上，即各段的主題句以及結(jié)尾的主題句都應(yīng)該有關(guān)鍵詞。

　　[例1]Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage on “The Advantages of Travel” based on the words and phrases given: advantages widen our knowledge, make friends, knowledge or geography,beautiful scenery, different lifestyle, customs and cultures, various foods,practice a foreign language,worth spending the time.

　　[范文]

　　The Advantages of Travel

　　Whenever a college student is asked“What are you going to do this summer vacation?”the most probable answer might be“I am going to have a trip.”It seems that college students are fond of traveling very much. Why?Because travel has numerous advantages.

　　First of all,travel can widen our knowledge of geography,the knowledge of different customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries. Secondly, we can make friends and practice a foreign language through traveling. Finally, travel is the best way of spending time. We can enjoy eating various local foods and seeing beautiful scenery.

　　In a word, we can benefit from travel in more than one way. It is worth spending the time.

　　作者在第一段中就用上了關(guān)鍵詞travel和advantage，并很巧妙地利用Because travel has numerous advantages這樣的承上啟下的句子來引出下文關(guān)于旅游的種種好處。最后又把關(guān)鍵詞用在了文章的結(jié)尾處，強(qiáng)化了主題，不失為畫龍點(diǎn)睛之筆。