But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（轉(zhuǎn)）
　　注：1. But 轉(zhuǎn)折詞（信號詞）
　　2. they emphasize that = they think that
　　3. today's society is not what it was 現(xiàn)代社會今非昔比
　　4. 許多知識 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge； 獲取知識 acquire/ get knowledge
　　5. knows nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉，盡量不要絕對化
　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：
　�。ê希㏄aragraph Ⅳ：（1）平衡兩種看法； （2）給出自己的觀點。
　　Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合）
　　Score: 11分
　　When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
　　注：結(jié)構(gòu)非常好，可以套用。
　　Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
　　注：1. "people, who……,"應(yīng)去掉逗號，改為限定性定語從句。
　　2. as many as bad books 改為 as many as bad ones
　　3. lead us to the wrong way 改為 lead sb. astray
　　4. they suggest that = they think that
　　5. touch 碰（閃光點詞匯）
　　But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that "to know more, to read more". So they believe that reading extensively is better.
　　注：1. hold "認(rèn)為"同樣表示"think"的詞還有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold
　　2. the best book 在西方國家是"圣經(jīng)"的意思
　　3. to know more, to read more 錯誤，中式英語
　　To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
　　范文　Is Television a Blessing or a Curse?
　　Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people's lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.
　　注：it is generally accepted that 人們通常認(rèn)為
　　As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating.
　　注：1. As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that
　　2."使……"不用make，而用keep, allow, offer
　　However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing. They argue that it has brought about many serious problems. The major one is its effects on young people. They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.
　　In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the use that determines its value to society.
　　范文　Traveling
　　People who like traveling have their reasons. They maintain that traveling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possibly have.
　　注：geographical and historical 押尾韻，如：押頭韻 clean & clear
　　Those who dislike traveling have their reasons. They would argue that traveling means a considerable amount of money and energy. For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.
　　In practice, traveling does more good than harm. If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some traveling from time to time. It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.
　　注：1. in practice = I
　　2. does more good than harm 好處比壞處多，其他表達方法：be superior to/ inferior to 比如：The advantages are superior to the disadvantages.
　　3. enable 使

上一頁  [1] [2]