下面的英語句子都是出自朗文國際三冊和四冊的學(xué)生作文, 不是病句就是錯句. 讓我們用銳利的眼睛, 一起來找茬吧.
1. We have computer class one week a time.
2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.
3. There have 100 books.
4. I study there very happy.
5. I usually swimming there.
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
7. Several hours after, he was surprised.
8. He had to asked the other one.
9. He thought he speak well.
10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .
11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.
12. This film is very good-looking .
13. It is very good to family look.
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.
16. I have a future dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life road.
18. I think everything must be change a lot.
19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.
20. But I singing not very well.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.
22. Almost students use the computer not study.
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
24. When I was very small.
怎么樣,找出錯誤沒有啊. 下面我們來看看要怎么改正吧.
1. I have computer class once a week.
英語中表達(dá)頻率次數(shù)時:一次 once, 兩次 twice 從三次開始用 three times ...
2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers.
這里使用動名詞going做主語, go 這個動作由后面的you 發(fā)出.
3. There are 100 books.
表示某個地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.
4. I study there very happily.
Study 是個動詞,表示動作的程度要使用副詞,不可以用形容詞happy.
5. I usually swim there.
-ing結(jié)尾的動名詞不可以單獨(dú)做句子的謂語.
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
這個句子的表達(dá)和語法上都有問題. 如果單從中文意思來看,大家都明白他在說什么,但是要是讓外教來批改,估計(jì)他會無盡的苦惱了.所以我們在不失句子原意的基礎(chǔ)上,使用正確的語法.該句子的表達(dá)應(yīng)該為:
By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.
7. Several hours later, he was surprised.
使用after時,不能放在時間表達(dá)語的后面.
8. He had to ask the other one.
“Have to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用動詞原形.
9. He thought he spoke well.
這個句子屬于語法時態(tài)的不一致.
10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .
一個英語句子中不能有兩個謂語動詞..
11. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese.
首先要區(qū)分hard 和 hardly.雖然兩個都可以做副詞,但在意思上有很大的區(qū)別. He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他幾乎不工作.這個兩個表達(dá)相差很大. 其次,be 動詞后面不能使用副詞.
12. This film is very interesting.
