名師示范英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作套路：分三步展開(kāi)

　　作文的展開(kāi)—按照三步走：

　　1)題目涉及的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的描述，在描述的過(guò)程中將寫(xiě)作引向文章的主題(這樣的描述可以自己控制，如果第一段落字?jǐn)?shù)單薄，可以適當(dāng)使描述具體化)

　　2)在第一步的基礎(chǔ)上給出觀點(diǎn)，觀點(diǎn)視文章主旨可以分為：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)(包括方法、途徑)，和多方觀點(diǎn)(觀點(diǎn)從正反兩方面或者一個(gè)方面的多個(gè)層次闡述;在交待觀點(diǎn)是需要有原因和支持。)

　　3)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)總結(jié)點(diǎn)題(同意異表)，簡(jiǎn)要指出方法途徑，如果找不到具體的解決方法，則將話講得圓滑(如果正文中間觀點(diǎn)沒(méi)有必然沖突，則可以融合)

　　A 1995.1 my view on the negative effects of some advertisements

　　à社會(huì)上的廣告現(xiàn)象越來(lái)越多，很多的廣告對(duì)我們的社會(huì)有不良的影響-〉(廣告如何多：路邊大型廣告，報(bào)紙一半是廣告，電線桿上垃圾廣告，電視商業(yè)廣告頻繁。)

　　Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much of newspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. However pervasive they are, (盡管他們四處充斥)they always produce a negative influence.

　　從觀點(diǎn)的多個(gè)層次描寫(xiě)：1，白日搶劫--賣(mài)家通過(guò)彎曲夸大事實(shí)來(lái)欺騙消費(fèi)者購(gòu)買(mǎi)(化妝品)2，種下不良消費(fèi)習(xí)慣或者價(jià)值觀(香煙)3，污染環(huán)境(牛皮癬和校園商業(yè)海報(bào))

　　To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence (百日搶劫每天都在發(fā)生)as a result of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and distort/ignore the facts.(夸大功能，歪曲事實(shí)) Every means is tried to hook people into buying(為了誘導(dǎo)人們消費(fèi)，不擇手段). Make-up promotion is a typical case in point.(化妝品促銷就是一個(gè)典型的例子) Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind (在腦海中植下)of consumers, especially young people, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further than cigarette selling. (香煙銷售就是一個(gè)典型的例子)Ads with the image of a smoking pop star broadcast an irresistible message.(傳遞無(wú)法抗拒的信息) Last but not least, easily-printed posters and handouts have polluted our environment.