2009年6月英語六級考前熱點高分范文(十)

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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)道路事故會給人們的生命和財產(chǎn)帶來很大的損失

　　2)分析道路事故發(fā)生的主要原因

　　3)如何降低事故發(fā)生率

　　Road Accidents

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因;說明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。

　　高分范文

　　Road Accidents

　　Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.

　　[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.

　　[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]插入語，as意為“作為”。

　　[2]表遞進。