2009年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考前熱點(diǎn)高分范文(七)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)隨著人們生活水平的提高，一些人認(rèn)為節(jié)儉和樸素的生活方式已經(jīng)過(guò)時(shí)了

　　2)但是很多人反對(duì)這種說(shuō)法

　　3)你的看法是…，為什么?

　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一種觀點(diǎn)，提綱第2點(diǎn)提出另外一種相反的觀點(diǎn)，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇钡挠^點(diǎn)，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：提出第1種觀點(diǎn)：節(jié)儉和樸素的生活方式已經(jīng)過(guò)時(shí)了，并說(shuō)明理由;提出第2種觀點(diǎn)：節(jié)儉和樸素仍然是一種美德，并說(shuō)明理由;表明“我”對(duì)節(jié)儉的看法，并說(shuō)明理由。

　　高分范文

　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?

　　With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style [2]and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.

　　[3]However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn’t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited [2]and some of them even are [4]on the decline. [5]Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.

　　[6]As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe [7] “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is [8]not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. [5]In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. [5]Besides, there are still millions of Chinese [9]living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. [5]Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.

　　【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　[1]“不再”。

　　[2]表示遞進(jìn)。

　　[3]引出另外一種觀點(diǎn)。

　　[4]“在下降”。