2009年6月英語六級考前熱點高分范文(二)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)有的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時主要看重高工資，而有的則認為良好的職業(yè)發(fā)展空間才是更重要的

　　2)闡述他們各自的考慮

　　3)表明你的看法

　　High Salaries or Career Development? _______________________________________________________________________________

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出兩種不同的選擇，提綱第2點要求分別闡述這兩種選擇各自的理由，提綱第3點要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對比選擇型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時不同的側(cè)重點：注重高工資和注重職業(yè)發(fā)展空間;對比闡述他們各自的理由;表明“我”的傾向并說明理由。

　　高分范文

　　High Salaries or Career Development?

　　There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.

　　[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.

　　In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點或傾向。

　　[2]用于對比分析兩種觀點各自的理由。

　　[3]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結(jié)構(gòu)充當(dāng)狀語。

　　[4]“因為缺錢”。

　　[5]強調(diào)句型，此處是強調(diào)句子的主語。

　　[6]while引導(dǎo)比較狀語從句，意為“然而”。

　　[7]“一般來說”。

　　[8]“選擇”。