六級(jí)寫作經(jīng)典范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)：自我介紹

　　在日常生活中，我們常常需要作自我介紹。雖然是介紹最熟悉的自己，但是要想讓別人聽(tīng)到以后有耳目一新的感覺(jué)卻并不容易。來(lái)看看作者是怎樣介紹她自己的。

　　Things about Me

　　I am Andrea. Perhaps the word “average”can best describe me. I am of average height, average weight and of average complexion. I have a thin face, double-lid eyes and a pointed nose. My hair is black, short and straight. I have never worn my hair long. I look like both my mother and my father, but I have inherited their best parts.

　　I am a teacher, and I like my job. I believe her or his students can sometimes teach a teacher. Actually I have learnt a lot from my own teaching experience and my students. One particularly good thing about being a teacher is that I am learning something new each day and thus making progress each day. This is wonderful. Of course the income is modest, but on the other hand, quite stable. I keep growing all the time. I find great rewards both monetarily and mentally.

　　I have many hobbies: reading books, raising pets, making dresses, etc. I like volleyball very much, but I can’t play it very often, because it is a team sport. It is difficult to get enough people to play volleyball with me. It’s a shame. I derive great pleasure from my hobbies①.

　　Generally speaking, I am open, honest and easy-going. I hate hypocrisy and injustice. Fairness is very important to me. I try to be fair in everything I do. I have great appreciation for physical and spiritual independence. I am a bit disorganized and impatient sometimes.

　　I don’t have many friends, but I do have a few. I have both male and female friends. We do sports together, go shopping together; and we exchange our views and ideas and share happiness and sadness. Of course we help each other if necessary.

　　I always consider myself a lucky person. I am lucky in my family, I am lucky in my career, I am lucky in my friendship, I am lucky in many things. In one word, I am lucky in life. I am really grateful for all these.

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　　行文點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　作者由表及里地介紹了自己的方方面面。第一段圍繞average一詞描寫了外貌，先讓讀者在感官上對(duì)“我”有了總體的印象。第二段介紹職業(yè)以及職業(yè)給“我”帶來(lái)了什么。第三段介紹興趣愛(ài)好。第四段簡(jiǎn)述性格特征。第五段敘述與朋友間的友誼。最后作者用了6個(gè)“l(fā)ucky”來(lái)總結(jié)全文。

　　文中每一段的主題都十分鮮明。語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)樸真實(shí)，行文流暢，簡(jiǎn)潔而鮮活地刻畫了一個(gè)真實(shí)的“我”。

　　好文妙譯

　　自我介紹

　　我叫安德里亞。也許“普通”一詞最能形容我。我中等身材，不胖也不瘦，不白也不黑。我有一張瘦削的臉，雙眼皮，翹鼻子，我烏黑的頭發(fā)又短又直，從未留過(guò)長(zhǎng)發(fā)。我長(zhǎng)得既像媽媽又像爸爸，不過(guò)我繼承了他們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

　　我現(xiàn)在是一名教師，我熱愛(ài)我的工作。我認(rèn)為，一個(gè)老師有時(shí)也能從他(她)的學(xué)生那兒學(xué)到知識(shí)。事實(shí)上，從我的教書經(jīng)歷，從我的學(xué)生們那里，我學(xué)到了許多許多。當(dāng)老師特別好的一點(diǎn)就是每天我都在學(xué)習(xí)新的東西，并因此而能夠每天取得進(jìn)步。這真是棒極了。當(dāng)然，收入并不高。然而，換個(gè)角度看，收入?yún)s是相當(dāng)穩(wěn)定的。我一直都在不斷進(jìn)步，在金錢方面與精神方面我都得到豐厚的回報(bào)。

　　我的興趣廣泛，比如：讀書，養(yǎng)寵物，制作衣服，等等。雖然我非常喜歡打排球，但由于這是一項(xiàng)團(tuán)隊(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)，我不能經(jīng)常去玩。要找到足夠多的人同我一起打排球是很難的，這是一件令人遺憾的事。興趣愛(ài)好給我?guī)��?lái)了無(wú)窮的樂(lè)趣。

　　總的說(shuō)來(lái)，我是一個(gè)外向、誠(chéng)實(shí)而隨和的人。我對(duì)任何虛偽和不公正都深惡痛絕。我極為珍視公平公正，對(duì)于所做的每一件事，我都盡力做到公平。我崇尚物質(zhì)上和精神上的獨(dú)立。不過(guò)，我有點(diǎn)兒不善計(jì)劃，有時(shí)還會(huì)急躁、沒(méi)耐性。

　　我朋友不多，卻頗有幾個(gè)相知好友，其中有男性也有女性。我和朋友們一起進(jìn)行體育運(yùn)動(dòng)；一起逛街購(gòu)物。我們交換各自的觀點(diǎn)看法，共享歡樂(lè)，分擔(dān)憂愁。當(dāng)然，如若需要，我們必定相互幫助。

　　我一直都覺(jué)得自己是一個(gè)幸運(yùn)的人。在家庭方面、在事業(yè)上、在交友方面、在許許多多方面，我都是幸運(yùn)的。總之，我的生活是幸運(yùn)的，我真的非常感激這一切的一切。

　　詞匯斟酌

　　��complexion n.膚色，面色

　　��monetarily ad. 從金錢角度

　　��hypocrisy n.偽善，虛偽

　　佳句臨摹

　�、佟咀⑨尅縟erive sth from sth 從…獲得…

　　【臨摹】She derived no benefit from the course of drugs.她用了這個(gè)療程的藥后不見(jiàn)一點(diǎn)好轉(zhuǎn)。

　　思如泉涌

　　To know oneself is true progress. 人貴有自知之明。

　　A good horse cannot be of a bad color. 良馬的毛色不會(huì)差。

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