A Letter in Reply to a Friend 給朋友的回信
Directions:
Write a composition entitled A Letter in Reply to a Friend. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
提示:假設你的好朋友李芳是大學四年級學生,正在考慮是考研究生繼續(xù)深造還是大學畢業(yè)后就踏上工作崗位。請給她寫封信表明你的態(tài)度。
英語四級作文寫作步驟構思:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇給朋友的回信。
步驟2:
引入話題:概括來信的問題;
展開話題:論述自己的建議;
話題結論:表達自己對朋友選擇的支持。
A Letter in Reply to a Friend
Aug. 24, 2011
DearFang,
I understand that you are in a dilemma. Although so many graduates are eager to set feet on their work-life road, there are still some who prefer to start their work-life after gaining higher degree to make better preparatioos for eotering society.
親愛的芳:
我知道你正處于一個兩難的境地。雖然這么多的畢業(yè)生都渴望踏上工作的道路,可還有一些畢業(yè)生更喜歡在獲得更高的學位后再開始工作,為步入社會做更好的準備。
In my opinion, the latter is more adminible. You are good at all your courses these years, so you have the advantages of pursuiog higher degree. In today's society, the achievement and status you can get and the devotion you can make are no doubt in proportion to your educational background, coupled with the efforts you put in them. If you want to stride to your object more smoothly and easily, why not head for the further study courageously? Besides, you probably will make new friends and reshape your ideas during your postgraduate study, which maybe make you reorient your career.
在我看來,后者更令人欽佩。這些年來,你很擅長你所有的課程,所以你有優(yōu)勢攻讀更高的學位。在當今社會中,你得到的成就和地位和你作出的貢獻毫無疑問是和你的教育背景成比例的,外加你為此付出的努力。如果你想更順利更輕松地達到你的目標,為什么不向繼續(xù)學習深造勇敢前進呢?此外,你在研究生學習期間可能會結交新朋友,重塑你的想法,這可能讓你重新定位職業(yè)生涯。
Whichever you choose, I firmly believe your effort will ensure your success. Afterall, it is you who have the finally say on the final choice.
無論你選擇什么,我堅信你的努力會確保你的成功。畢竟,最后的決定要由你來定奪。
Best wishes.
給你最美好的祝福。
Yous sincerely,
Li Ming
(117 words)
你最真誠的
李明
2011年8月24日
高分句型解析:
Besides, you probably will make new friends and reshape your ideasduring your postgraduate study, which maybe make you reorient your career.此外,你在研究生學習期間可能會結交新朋友,重塑你的想法,這可能讓你重新定位職業(yè)生涯。
點評:這是一個由which引導的非限制性定語從句,which指代的是前面整句話的內(nèi)容。
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