2010年英語四級考試作文評分標準及錯誤總結

　　評分標準

　　2分……條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。

　　5分……基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。

　　8分……基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫;語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。

　　11分……切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。��

　　14分……切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好。基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。(注: 白卷, 作文與題目毫不相關, 或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想,則給0分。)

　　常見寫作錯誤

　　一、主語錯誤

　　1. 主語缺失

　　1)In our country feels very free.

　　People feel free in our country.

　　2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.

　　People in my hometown are very busy.

　　2. 非名詞主語

　　1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.

　　Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.

　　2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

　　Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

　　3. 主謂錯位

　　1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.

　　People can acquire knowledge from books.

　　2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.

　　Now people can’t do without TV.

　　二、謂語錯誤

　　1. 多重謂語

　　1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.

　　In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.

　　2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.

　　Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.

　　2. 非動詞謂語

　　1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.

　　Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.

　　2)It is said that the place worths touring.

　　It is said that the place is worth touring.

　　3. 主謂不一致

　　1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.

　　I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.

　　2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.

　　I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..

　　4. 誤用詞組

　　1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.

　　They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.

　　2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.

　　I am afraid that it’s going to rain.