佳句臨摩
1.佳句:You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
臨摩:離婚率上升盡管令人難過,但卻是不爭的事實(shí)。
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2.佳句:Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.
臨摩: 在過去的三十年,發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步,其中包括健康水平的提高。
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3.佳句:From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.
臨摩:我認(rèn)為,對于我們來說,更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都喜歡追求名牌
2)產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么
3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因,提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂υ摤F(xiàn)象的看法,由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容:描述目前熱衷于大學(xué)生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象;分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因;闡述“我”對大學(xué)生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。
高分范文
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】
[1]“有…傾向”。
[2]過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。
[3] follow表示“跟隨,追求(趨勢或時(shí)尚)”
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。
[6] it為形式主語,不定式為真正主語。
[7]“遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出他們的消費(fèi)能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。
[8]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。not…but連接并列成分。
[9]“而不是”。
佳句臨摹
1. 佳句:It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.
臨。簩Υ髮W(xué)生來說,了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。
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2. 佳句:In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.
臨。涸谑澜缟匣蛟S沒有什么游戲像賭博
像賭博的那么有害和危險(xiǎn)了,它經(jīng)常會(huì)導(dǎo)致一個(gè)人破產(chǎn),還會(huì)玷污人的心靈。
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3. 佳句:Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.
臨。汉芏嗤瑢W(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲,這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間,而不是一種有益的放松方式。
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