2010年6月大學英語四六級考試寫作全面解讀(8)

　　第五章 實戰(zhàn)演練——四級作文模擬訓練及范文

　　模擬訓練一

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

　　1.大學校園內(nèi)各種證書的報考十分火熱;

　　2.大學生考證的利弊;

　　3.考證面前，我的選擇。

　　The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus

　　模擬訓練二

　　Directions:

　　1. 上圖所示為我國吸毒者年齡分布情況，請描述其變化;

　　2. 請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因;

　　3. 這一變化對社會和個人的。

　　模擬訓練三

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)近年來發(fā)生在校園的意外事件不斷增加，校園安全問題備受關(guān)注;

　　2)對此我們應(yīng)該采取哪些措施。

　　Campus Security

　　參考范文

　　模擬訓練一

　　【范文】

　　The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus

　　Recently, getting certificates has been brought into focus.The advertisements for training schools occupy a large proportion of the bulletin board, and booksellers fill their shelves with many reference books.And eager students spare their money and time for these courses and books.

　　Getting Certificates has been beneficial in several aspects.The most important one is that with more certificates, students have access to more and better job opportunities.In addition, they can make more contacts with the outside world in the course of getting certificates.However, every coin has two sides.The pursuit of certificates is no exception.Some students believe that the more certificates, the better it is.Getting certificates make the students become bookish easily.Some of them even neglect their routine learning in the process of getting certificates.

　　As for as I’m concerned, certificates certify students’ previous efforts.But whether these pieces of paper can benefit students or not, depends on what they have really gained.Therefore, before dazzling choices, we must have a clear attitude and scientific strategy, and then certificates are beneficial.

　　【點評】

　　文章以描述大學校園內(nèi)各種證書的報考十分火熱這一現(xiàn)象開始進入主題，逐步分析大學生考證的利弊，最后說明考證面前，我的選擇。a large proportion of，make more contacts with，dazzling choices，have a clear attitude and scientific strategy等精彩句式的搭配使用，使文章增色不少。

　　模擬訓練二

　　【范文】

　　On Drug Addicts

　　As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in the age distribution of drug addicts.To be concrete, the teenage addicts only made up 10 percent of all the drugsters in 1982 while the ratio rose up to 65 in 2002.

　　What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are three reasons.First, teenagers’ fearless curiosity about everything new has led some of them into this marsh.Second, many of the young addicts turned for the first time to drugs for escape either from their failure in the national entrance exams or from their parents’ breakup.And above all, our education in the harmfulness of drugs has been far from adequate to build teenagers’ sound resistance to drugs.To sum up, the causes mentioned above must call for more of our concern.

　　From the description above, we might have an overall understanding of the serious situation of drug addicts.For one thing, drug-taking does great damage to the health of drug users.For another, some drug users commit robbery or even murder their parents and relatives to get money to buy drugs, which poses a great threat to the social security and the social stability.Therefore, it is urgent for us to put an end to this trend.