2010年6月大學(xué)英語四六級考試寫作全面解讀(6)

　　7.Those urban planners who are blind to this point will pay a heavy price, which they cannot afford it.

　　那些城市的規(guī)劃者們?nèi)绻�忽視這一點(diǎn)，將會付出他們無法承受的代價。

　　8.There is a growing tendency these days for many people who live in rural areas to come into and work in city. This problem has caused wide public concern in most cities all over the world.

　　農(nóng)民進(jìn)城打工呈增長的趨勢，這一問題在世界上大部分城市已引起普遍關(guān)注。

　　9.Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts.

　　盡管民工對城市的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)，然而他們也不可避免的帶來了一些負(fù)面影響。

　　10.As is known to all, fake and inferior commodities harm the interests of consumers.

　　眾所周知，假冒偽劣商品損害了消費(fèi)者的利益。

　　四、熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測：就業(yè)擇業(yè) 網(wǎng)絡(luò)/媒體購物

　　例文一

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic More Candidates for Civil Servant. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1、 現(xiàn)在有越來越多的大學(xué)應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生報考公務(wù)員，帶來了一定的不利因素;

　　2、 列舉兩到三個不利因素加以論述;

　　3、 你對此有何看法。

　　【思路點(diǎn)撥】

　　本文是一篇主要論述大學(xué)生報考公務(wù)員增多的原因和對此看法的文章。從提綱可以看出，文章是側(cè)重分析這一現(xiàn)象背后深層次的原因。所以第一段簡單闡述大學(xué)生報考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象并分析原因;第二段可用論證或是舉實(shí)例的方法列舉其不利因素;第三段提出作者觀點(diǎn)或是針對這一現(xiàn)象的負(fù)面影響的對策。

　　【參考范文】

　　More Candidates for Civil Servant

　　Nowadays many college graduates apply for civil servant positions. It is true that the positions are ideal in terms of incomes, employment security and respect of others. However, the ever increasing number of applicants doesn't necessarily mean a good thing. The fever for civil servant has brought some side effects. The side effects are listed as follows:

　　Firstly, many students apply for the positions for wrong reasons. Some of them apply just because their friends do it or because their parents want them. Some, instead of aiming at serve the people, have the intention of enjoying the interests and power brought by their future position. Secondly, too many candidates compete for limited positions. Take such hot positions as those in the judicial branch of government for example, it is estimated that one matriculate is selected out of 200 candidates. More worse, with the flow of most talents to such positions, those positions that are important for social welfare but inferior in personal welfare are left uninterested. This should arouse our deep concern.

　　For my part, college students should be cautious when deciding whether to apply for the positions. On the one hand, they should not follow others blindly. On the other hand, there are plenty of ways of employment and self-employment, so why crowd on one bus? In a word, the fever should be cooled down.

　　【點(diǎn)評】

　　本文屬于現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。首先通過對當(dāng)前很多人報考公務(wù)員這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行闡釋，接著討論造成這一想像的原因，最后總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)自己對此的觀點(diǎn)。文中精彩詞匯包括：apply for，the ever increasing number of，compete for，arouse our deep concern，cooled down。其中句式It is estimated that…;以及疑問句的使用So why crowd on one bus?也成為文章亮點(diǎn)。

　　例文二

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Media and Shopping. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1. 當(dāng)今，各種媒體非常發(fā)達(dá)，人們通過媒體購物相當(dāng)普遍起來;

　　2. 媒體購物給人們帶來很多方便，同時也暴露出其弊端;

　　3. 我的看法。

　　【思路點(diǎn)撥】

　　提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種新興事物時下非常流行，提綱第2點(diǎn)針對比該事物的優(yōu)勢和缺陷，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為利弊對比型作文。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述時下媒體發(fā)展迅猛，媒體購物也逐漸流行;闡述其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和弊端;最后談?wù)勛约旱目捶〝M或是提出對策如何最大限度的減少其弊端的影響。網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂對傳統(tǒng)課堂的挑戰(zhàn);提出關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂是否會取代傳統(tǒng)課堂的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)并說明理由;表明“我”的態(tài)度并說明理由。