2010年6月大學(xué)英語四級考試寫作思路突破(5)

　　The following reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education. Firstly, during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough. So they turn to continuing education to gain more knowledge and skills. Moreover, as the science and technology in China are developing very fast, adults after graduation have to refresh themselves. In addition, in modern society, those without bachelor's degrees or above are less competitive。

　　As far as I am concerned, the boom in continuing education is a necessity. It provides those on-the-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge. As our society develops, more and more people will receive continuing education in the future。

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　　文章提綱式圖表作文。第一段對圖表反映數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行介紹。第二段運(yùn)用The following reasons are responsible for順勢提出這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因。第三段作者用As far as I am concerned提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。

　　本文使用了描述數(shù)量的詞匯increasing from …to …, grew to …，reached 以及In addition，provides … with…, to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge等一些精彩的語言，成為文章亮點(diǎn)。

　　訓(xùn)練三

　　【范文】

　　On Water Shortage

　　No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted. Actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.

　　A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones. To begin with, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed. In addition, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage. Besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem. What’s worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.

　　In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources. Secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.

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　　文章以描述人類面臨水資源匱乏問題進(jìn)入主題并且對人們的生活造成影響，逐步引伸到造成水資源匱乏的原因，最后提出解決措施進(jìn)行展望。文章內(nèi)容符合提綱要求，并且文章使用so…that…;it is essential that +虛擬語氣等句式，以及account for，ever-increasing，contributes to，In view of 等詞匯的使用顯示出考生的語言功底。另外，第二段to begin with, in addition和第三段First, Secondly的使用使論述層次清晰。