2010年6月大學(xué)英語四六級考試寫作全面解讀(4)

　　四、模板套用

　　2009年12月 六級真題實例

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short passage entitled Should parents send their kids to art classes? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

　　現(xiàn)在有不少家長送孩子參加各種藝術(shù)班;

　　1. 對這種做法有人表示支持;

　　2. 有人并不贊成;

　　3. 我認為…

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　　【審 題】分析題目，此作文屬于對比選擇類文章，并且題目中已經(jīng)給出提綱，考生只需要按照提綱寫出：支持的理由、反對的理由、我的觀點。但最好在前面加上一個引言段。引言可以是簡單的對全文觀點的總結(jié)，也可以是相關(guān)爭議的背景介紹。支持送孩子學(xué)藝術(shù)的理由不外乎成就藝術(shù)天才和培養(yǎng)興趣愛好;反對的理由不外乎孩子壓力過大和順其自然等。結(jié)尾段總結(jié)自己的觀點，具備實力的考生還要寫出點新意，運用閃光詞匯。

　　【思路一】第一段：指出現(xiàn)象，以及相關(guān)爭議的背景介紹;

　　第二段：支持送孩子學(xué)藝術(shù)的理由;

　　第三段：反對送孩子學(xué)藝術(shù)的理由;

　　第四段：“我”的觀點。

　　【范文一】

　　Should Parents Send their Kids to Art Classes?

　　(1)Children are the future of the nation, (2)the pearl in their parents’ eyes. Hoping that their kids can become the cream of the crop among others, more and more parents send their kids to various art classes to let them learn more. However, people hold different opinions toward this phenomenon.

　　(3) (4)Some individuals maintain that attending classes is aimed to broaden their kids’ horizon and enrich their knowledge in that the kinds can get acquainted with peers from different family background. (5)In the class, exposed to a big family they will learn how to cooperate with each other and how to develop a harmonious relationship with his her classmates, which is absolutely essential when children grow up.

　　There are some people who hold different opinions. They argue that because some kids put in a large amount of time in the class, they even can’t set aside time to stay together with their parents and share their feeling, good or bad, with their family members.

　　(6)As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the phenomenon discussed above. If children can display their potential and they are interested in what they are doing, (7)then parents are expected to provide the children a chance to give a full play of their ability. But if they are disgusted at the class, parents are supposed to support their kids to be engaged in other activities.

　　【點 評】

　　范文點評：

　　(1)開門見山對相關(guān)爭議的背景做簡單介紹。

　　(2)the pearl in their parents’ eyes掌上明珠，語言地道。

　　(3) Some individuals maintain that…引出支持孩子學(xué)藝術(shù)的理由。

　　(4)使用亮點詞匯 broaden their kids’ horizon and enrich their knowledge，develop a harmonious relationship with。