2009年6月英語四級考前熱點高分范文(八)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese：

　　1)簡單介紹個人情況

　　2)說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額

　　3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心

　　A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款;說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額;保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。

　　高分范文

　　A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

　　Sep 12th, 2008

　　To whom it may concern,

　　I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.

　　My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.

　　[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Song Xue

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。

　　[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。

　　[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。