Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Does a Student Need Private Tutoring? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)根據(jù)調(diào)查,目前在全國(guó)的大城市中有大約80%的中學(xué)生都有私人家教
2)分析中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的利弊
3)你的看法
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象的利弊,提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇钡目捶ǎ纱丝膳袛啾疚膽?yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容:描述中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的現(xiàn)狀;分析中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教的利弊;談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教現(xiàn)象的看法。
高分范文
Does a Student Need Private Tutoring?
A recent investigation shows that about 70 percent of middle school students in cities have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are [1]attaching greater importance to education. [2]However, private tutoring [3]has both advantages and disadvantages.
Many parents have no enough ability or time to help their children in study. Private tutoring is a good solution to this problem. [2]In addition, private tutoring is usually one-to-one, so the teacher can know [4]the weak points as well as [4]the strong points of the pupil, and thus teaching is, [5]in most cases, directly to the point. [2]On the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.
[2]For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that he can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. [2]For another, some tutors, [5]busy “shuttling” from one family to another, [6]tend to neglect their teaching duties as tutors.
[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think [3]the disadvantages of private tutoring outweigh its advantages.
In my opinion, greater emphasis should be laid [8]on classroom teaching and practice, [8]on the improvement of teaching quality [8]and on the tapping of the pupil’s potential. [9]Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
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