2009年6月英語四級考前熱點高分范文(二)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)現(xiàn)在很多年輕人每個月都把自己賺的錢花光，他們被稱作“月光族”

　　2)有人認為這是一種時尚的消費觀念，但很多人反對這樣消費

　　3)我對此的看法是……

　　The Moonlight Clan

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點針對該現(xiàn)象提出兩種不同的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談“我”的看法，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：描述“月光族”現(xiàn)象，引出對這一現(xiàn)象的不同看法;對比闡述兩種看法各自的理由;表明“我”對“月光族”的看法并說明理由。

　　高分范文

　　The Moonlight Clan

　　Nowadays, more and more people, [1]especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan”. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings. [2]Many people think this is a fashionable life style, [2]while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.

　　[3]Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. [3]However, more other people criticize “the moonlight clan”. They say that the consumption habit of “the moonlight clan” is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will [4]place “the moonlight clan” in a difficult position [5]in case of unexpected expenses.

　　[6]Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, [7]though “the moonlight clan” may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, [8]in the long term, it [9]is unfavorable to their family and career. [10]Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]“尤其，特別”。

　　[2]用于提出兩種對立觀點。

　　[3]用于引出兩種對立觀點各自的理由。

　　[4]“使…處于艱難的境地”。