新東方：英語四級考試作文30天學習筆記(2)

　　But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health. They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second. And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack. In

　　addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents. Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property.

　　注：1.They have heard the official reports that ... 官方報告表明……

　　2. be more likely to 更有可能，更容易

　　3. chance 可能性

　　There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else. If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?

　　注：1. outweigh 比……重要，同樣的表達：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重

　　2. 最后用兩句反問句結尾，非常精妙。課后作業(yè) Private Cars

　　寫成4段的首段寫法：

　�、� In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China. People's attitude toward private cars varies widely.

　　② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car. Yet, people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.

　�、� In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.

　　寫成3段的首段寫法：

　　With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard,

　　more and more people can own private cars.

　　cars are entering ordinary families.

　　the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)

　　支持段的主題句：

　　Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.

　　There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.

　　支持段的分論點：

　�、� 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.

　�、� 舒適 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.

　�、� 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.

　　否定段的主題句：

　　① However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But),

　　there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.

　　② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.

　�、� Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects

　�、� Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.

　　⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.

　�、� Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that......

　　⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.

　�、� Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.