新東方：英語四級考試作文30天學(xué)習(xí)筆記(1)

　　實例二 99年6月真題

　　Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

　　Outline: 1. 有人認為讀書要有選擇 2. 有人認為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書 3. 我的想法

　　Score: 8分

　　Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and

　　some books are harmful to people.

　　Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.

　　It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.

　　失分原因：結(jié)構(gòu)失調(diào)，表述方式單一

　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　(啟)Paragraph I：

　　(1)引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點;(2)簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。

　　Score: 14分

　　How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(啟)

　　注：第一句提出問題，第二句提出兩種見解

　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　(承)Paragraph II： (1)提出一種觀點或優(yōu)點;(2)本段的支持性分論點;(3)本段總結(jié)(可以省略)。

　　Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.(承)

　　注：1. 本段總分總結(jié)構(gòu)

　　2. they argue that = they think that

　　3. with the development of... 隨著……的發(fā)展

　　4. what's more 遞進關(guān)系，moreover

　　5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的

　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　(轉(zhuǎn))Paragraph III：(1)承上啟下的過渡句;(2)

　　提出另一種觀點或缺點;(3)本段的支持性分論點(4)本段總(可以省略)。

　　But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.(轉(zhuǎn))

　　注：1. But 轉(zhuǎn)折詞(信號詞)

　　2. they emphasize that = they think that

　　3. today's society is not what it was 現(xiàn)代社會今昔非比

　　4. 許多知識 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge;

　　獲取知識 acquire/ get knowledge

　　5. knows nothing→little;he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉