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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 表達(dá)自己對(duì)晚交論文一事的歉意。
2. 說(shuō)明未能按時(shí)交論文的原因。
3. 表示自己將盡快把論文補(bǔ)交上并表示以后將按時(shí)交作業(yè)。
●審題概述●
這是一封道歉信,寫的時(shí)候要遵循道歉信的一般模式:開(kāi)篇直奔主題,然后說(shuō)明原因,最后提出可能的補(bǔ)救措施。第一段,對(duì)晚交論文及對(duì)此造成的后果表示歉意;第二段,說(shuō)明理由(可信的理由,而不是隨便應(yīng)付老師的借口);第三段,表示盡快完成論文。
【范文】
A Letter of Apology
Dear Mr. Wang,
、買 am writing to apologize for my late homework. The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven’t even started it yet. I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you.
I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days. Therefore, I couldn’t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper. As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.
Fortunately I have finally fully recovered. I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
表明歉意
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示:
、 I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用開(kāi)頭句式
② assign: 分配,指定,布置
、 due;到期的,預(yù)期的
、 I’m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
解釋原因,雖然不是真的給人道歉,但是理由還是要充分的好。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示:
① referential: 用作參考的
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
表明盡快完成論文,并表示以后會(huì)按時(shí)交論文
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示:
① try my best to….. in the future: 道歉信常用結(jié)尾
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