【15天沖刺】攻克英語四級寫作-1

　　從今天開始，以后的6天里，我們做考前的最后沖刺，要求大家每天寫一篇文章，然后對照范文找到自己的不足。在范文后面我還附上了一些精美的文章，都沖出了四級作文的套路，在臨考之前給大家一些新鮮空氣，告訴大家作文并不是“洋八股”，大家要仔細閱讀，從中學習一些句型和用詞。

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: How to Keep Fit. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1）解釋說明要保持健康的原因

　　2）說明如何保持健康

　　3）說明保持健康的重要性

　　參考范文

　　How to Keep Fit

　　It is obvious that we should keep fit.（引出話題，要保持健康）On one hand, good health enables you to work more attentively and enjoy your life.（原因一）On the other hand, poor health will deprive you of the right to have a good time and you may lose many chances to enjoy yourself.（原因二）

　　There are many remarkable ways to keep your health.（本段的主題句，保持健康的方法有很多種）First of all, we should exercise everyday.（第一種方式是運動）We can get up a little earlier in the morning to have a jog in the garden.（對運動方式的擴展，例如晨跑）We can also have a walk after supper.（對運動方式的擴展，例如晚飯后散步）They are very helpful to our health.（對幾種運動方式的總結）What’s more, we have to give up bad habits that are harmful to our health, such as smoking.（保持健康的第二種方式，戒掉壞習慣）Thirdly, we have to go on a diet sometimes or to have meals more regularly.（保持健康的第三種方式，健康飲食）

　　Personally, I think health is of great importance to us.（我的觀點）So we will develop good habits to keep ourselves healthy.（對自己的觀點加以強調）

　　第一段說明要保持健康的兩個原因；

　　第二段說明保持健康的三種方法，并對其中一種方法進行擴展說明；

　　第三段說明我的觀點：保持健康很重要。

　　經典欣賞

　　1. When the door of happiness closes, another opens, but often times we look so long at the closed door that we don’t see the one which has been opened for us.

　　一道幸福之門關閉時，另一扇就會打開。我們經常太多太多地只看見關閉的門，而對開啟的門卻熟視無睹。

　　2. It’s true that we don’t know what we’ve got until we lose it, but it’s also true that we don’t know what we’ve been missing until it arrives.

　　無疑，一件東西只有失去時，我們才會懂得其真正的價值。同樣，一件東西在得到之前，我們并不意識到它的缺少。

　　3. Giving someone all your love is never an assurance that they’ll love you back. Don’t expect love in return; just wait for it to grow in their heart but if it doesn’t, be content that it grew in yours. It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, and a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

　　將愛全部付出，并不能確保一定會得到回報。別指望愛有什么回報，耐心地等待她在你所愛的人心里生根發(fā)芽，成長壯大。即使不會那樣，也要感到滿足，相信愛會在自己的心里成長。迷戀一個人只需要一分鐘，喜歡一個人需要一個小時，愛上一個人需要一天，而要忘記一個人則需要一輩子的時間。

　　4. Don’t go for looks; they can deceive. Don’t go for wealth; even that fades away. Go for someone who makes you smile because it takes only a smile to make a dark day seem bright. Find the one that makes your heart smile.

　　不要追求華麗的外表，外表常常具有欺騙性。不要追求萬貫家產，財富也會散盡。尋找那些可以使你永遠微笑的人們，只有微笑才能使黑暗的日子變得光明。尋找那些能夠使你心靈微笑的人。

　　5. Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do.

　　做自己想做的夢吧。去自己想去的地方吧。做自己想做的人吧。生命只有一次，機會只有一回。

　　6. Happiness exists for those who cry, those who hurt, those who have searched, and those who have tried, for only they can appreciate the importance of people who have touched their lives. Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear. The brightest future will always be based on a forgotten past. You can’t go on well in life until you let go of your past failures and heartaches.

　　幸福屬于那些會哭泣的人，那些受過傷害的人，那些去追尋的人，那些去嘗試的人。只有他們才懂得對自己生活中有影響的人們的重要。愛以微笑開始，在親吻中成長，以淚水終結。光明燦爛的明天建立在忘卻的過去之上。只有讓以往的失敗和傷心隨風而去，你才能過得更好。

　　7. Please send this message to those people who mean something to you; to those who have touched your life in one way or another; to those who make you smile when you really need it; to those that make you see the brighter side of things when you are really down; to those who you want to let them know that you appreciate their friendship, and if you don’t, don’t worry, nothing bad will happen to you, you will just miss out on the opportunity to brighten someone’s day with this message.

　　請把這些言語送給那些你所關心的人，那些在生活中這樣或那樣同自己打交道的人，那些在你需要時給你帶來微笑的人，那些在逆境中依然使你能看到光明的人，那些珍視友誼的人。即使你沒有這樣做，也不要緊。沒有什么大不了的事情，你只是錯過了用這些言語照亮他人日子的機會。